Esther

@esther-c

Thank you! When we got sick we were saying “well, at least we won’t be sick on Christmas this way!” But now…

@savannah_grace2009

That’s really weird.

@esther-c

Livia

“Yeah, that is stupid,” she agreed. “It’s stupid because did you really think that I would be mad?” she laughed.  “I honestly do not care. This is all new to me too, and I kind of feel the same way sometimes. But…” she felt herself blushing, “I really like you too.”

@esther-c

oh my goodness! I thought I replied to you, but I guess wyoh ate it 🤷‍♀️🤣 so I will do a redo as well

oooh! Volleyball violin and fiction are awesome!
Being the firstborn girl, you might as well be the oldest XD

lets go homeschoolers!
I don’t know what made me wanna try thriller. It just kinda turned into one.  It was weird 🤣

oh th…[Read more]

@esther-c

Livia

“Everything’s fine,” Lukas said.

“No, it’s not,” Liv shook her head. “I could tell a mile away that something’s bothering you, and it’s not going to do any good if you try to hide it from me.” she shook her head, “it’s not like I’m going to get mad at you or anything, or leave you…just tell me what’s wrong.” she paused. “Please.”

@esther-c

of course! 🙂

@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @rae @grcr @freedomwriter76

Okay, so I did it!! I finally wrote a scene for my contemporary story (I’m not honestly sure what book this will be in since I’m planning on writing at least one book in every sibling’s POV) this one is in Colton’s Pov, and just based on this scene I would like to know…[Read more]

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Chase Duke

Chase sucked in a breath, but he didn’t tense. Sef was worthy to hug him, because she had felt the same pain, the same emotions, the same hardships. He gently hugged her back, closed his eyes and sighed. It felt good to hug someone who actually understood.

@esther-c

I hope Callie’s watching! If I’m not mistaking,…[Read more]

@esther-c

Aww…Lukas has a crush! <333 (so does Liv…lol)

Livia 

“Are you sure? You can tell me anything,” Liv smiled back.

(Sorry I didn’t know what else to have her say, lol)

@rae

Sef

She didn’t know where she was. All she knew was that she wanted to leave.

All around her people were dancing in pairs.

“Excuse me, miss,” a woman…[Read more]

@esther-c

Are you referring to the fact that it says it was 9:25?

@esther-c

I know Abbie Emmons on YouTube loves the three act story structure, so if you want to explore that a little more, I suggest checking out her videos. Especially the one just about the inciting incident. I think she does a pretty good job of explaining it. 😉

I will check it out!! I need all the help I can get…. XD

@mineralizedwritings

Tysm for your help and encouragement!! Every single time someone tells me something they loved about my story it makes me smile 🙂

At the end. I don’t think pregnancy is enough to make somebody have that many issues unless she was also sick, and the buildup made me think her sickness was going to tie into the greater story i…

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@esther-c

Huh, I’ve never really thought of it that way before, but I think that’s the aspect of their relationship that I play off of in the second book to create more conflict. Man, I am going to be pondering over this all day. XD

XD glad I could make you think! It might be a good source of conflict for book 2, but I think it would be great if…[Read more]

@rae @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @beth-torres @whalekeeper @esther-c @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @acancello @loopylin @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom

Reminder! We’re planning to smash that record into the dust at 5 EST/4 CST/3 MST/2 PST.

@esther-c

1. Were you drawn into the story right away?

Yes, I think Ev’s immediate snarkiness and Ami’s responses just show what kind of book it’s going to be XD

2. What are your first impressions of these characters? (Specifically the MCs. I know some of y’all already know these charries, but just pretend this is the first time you’re mee…[Read more]

@esther-c Wow! I really like it so far! It pulls you in really well, and I like the cliffhanger type chapter endings. I’ll try to answer the questions!

1. Were you drawn into the story right away?

Yep!

2. What are your first impressions of these characters? (Specifically the MCs. I know some of y’all already know these charries, but just p…[Read more]

@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @whalekeeper @euodia-vision @hybridlore @loopylin @trailblazer @rae @janellebelovedpig @felicity @karissa-chmil @landric @booksbyjayna  @everyone!
I DID IT!! I’M DONE WITH THE ROUGH DRAFT OF MY FIRST NOVEL!!!!!!!

Oh my gosh this is so…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @smiley @esther-c @rae @hybridlore @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @acancello @mineralizedwritings @vinagirl

Okay, I really have been working on this chapter a bunch, and I would like to know you’re guys’ thoughts! I know some of you guys have read this chapter, but I was wondering if you had any…[Read more]

@esther-c

Girl I love Ami and Ev!!! I love Ev’s personality, I wish I had a friend like him XD

1. Were you drawn into the story right away?

I kind of agree with Min, it seemed really abrupt, and I was a little confused at first. But the action also made me want to see what happened next, so it drew me in, but only because I was confused and…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thanks for giving specific question, it really helps!

Answering as if I’ve never heard your writing before XD

1. Were you drawn into the story right away?

I was confused as to why the story had so much action before a exposition. It felt like information overload on many things, and I couldn’t tell what was important. Should, I think…[Read more]