Esther

@esther-c Gotcha! A P.S. would be fun, but it might lessen the impact of the ending, so it depends on what you do. As it is right now, it doesn’t scream “actual letter” to me. It’s kind of like a thank-you-note (not exactly, but I don’t know how else to explain it.) or just a note. With a word count as short as yours, that’s fine, but maybe it’d…[Read more]

Should I tag some people!? I guess so.  ^^^^^^

@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @grcr @linus-smallprint @raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas

hello, hybrid lore told me to tag people if I wanted them to give feedback over my stuff, so if you guys wouldn’t mind, could you judge my story? Thanks! 😅

(it is…[Read more]

@esther-c

It looks great! This was a cool idea. I think you did a good job inserting a theme into such a tiny paragraph. Out of curiosity, how much do you have left in the word count?

Also, are you planning to add a name at the top?

@esther-c

Awesome!

@keilah-h

Sure thing.

@calyhuge Yes…I think that applies to me even…I’ve done that before, and it doesn’t go well.

@esther-c you’re welcome!!

@esther-c

Nice! I love that hymn!!!!!!

@esther-c ooh this is interesting! I agree with Liberty, fixing the tenses would help it make a bit more sense.

@ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah_h @koshka @freed_and_redeemed trailblazer @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet_pidyon @power @jonas

Please pardon me, everyone…I can’t believe I forgot about the deadline!!!!! So sorry about that…

Well, it looks like all things work together for good since Esthe…[Read more]

@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h

The others:@power  @calyhuge  @whalekeeper   @theducktator  @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal  @trailblazer  @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley  @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity  @savannah_grace2009  @koshka

Please pard…[Read more]

@esther-c @keilah-h

Would some more time help?

Oh, I forgot to tag you:

@esther-c

@esther-c

Ugh, yes. Today at work I realized a little kid was watching me out of the corner of his eye. It was really obvious. Now I keep wondering what it looks like when I do it.

@Esther-c

I’m already committed to reading two other people’s WIPs, but I don’t care I’m still subscribing to this topic!!! One day I’ll get around to getting everything read *sigh* 🤣

Lol! 😂 Yay! 😄

@esther-c me neither, i just couldn’t figure out a good plot for the story basing off the one verse

@savannah_grace2009

AHHH YESSSS MARKY BOYYYY ( @esther-c your nickname stuck lol, no going back now!!! hahaha)

This makes me so happy 🤭🤣

Oh my word, reading through everyone’s comments…. aghhhh!!! I need to seriously start reading it, I’ve just been so busyyy 😭

@whalekeeper

Omc thank you so much girl, that means a lot…you’re gonna make me cryyyy

Ahhh thank youuuu 😭😭💜💜💜💜💜

Your critique was EXACTLY what I was looking for, so thank you!!!

–Characters are very easy to picture, and not very easy to forget. XD So you’re good in that area.

YAYYYY!!! That’s one of the things I was worried about, and I’m s…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @koshka @theducktator @hybridlore @theshadow @esther-c

Well, my dad just got a call from the police, and they arrested the lady who did it. He’s on his way to the police station right now to pick up his wallet and his keys and stuff. Take a look at that! God is good.

@esther-c

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