@esther-c
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @esther-c
Tags were weird. ⬆️
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @esther-c
Ayla
Some one had heard me, and he had a gun. Guns weren’t supposed to exist in fantasy novels! I pointed my sword at him, hoping I didn’t look terrified. My adventure had barely begun, and I hadn’t met a single old wizard. I couldn’t die yet! “Get thee hence, thou beet…[Read more]
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The Ducktator started the topic Mini Adventure Ideas? in the forum Plotting 2 months, 2 weeks ago
One of my WIPs is about a duck who wants to see the world, or at least part of it. Each chapter is a single adventure. Chapter One, in which Linda raids Walmart, can be found here: https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/contemporary-duck-wip-the-chronicles-of-linda-rose/
Anyway, I’m stuck on ideas. Does anyone have any mini adventure ideas for a…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Avoiding Preachiness in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Yw! I’m glad to be of help! 🙂
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RAE replied to the topic HELP WANTED! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
That’s okay.
Offer’s open if you ever want to.
Mandin and Nahim’s relationship is probably my favorite part. I enjoyed reading it a lot.
That’s good to hear! Those parts are usually the best parts to write. Of the two characters, who do you like better?
I’ll probably have the ninth chapter ready soon.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Avoiding Preachiness in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Well, I’m not sure this will be too helpful for you, but hopefully you get something from it.
It’s my personal opinion that our stories grow with our character. I don’t like to assume what other people’s lives have been. Just because somebody comes across one way doesn’t mean their life has been easy or hard, or in the middle.
Most…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Thanks!! < 3
Don’t worry I already sent freedom way too many pictures while I was drawing it 😝
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @esther-c
I don’t know if there’s an armory in this place, so I just added one.
Ayla
I rubbed my eyes blearily. Had I fallen out of bed? I put my hand on the ground. It was…stone? I leapt to my feet. “Wow.” Sun shone through a high circular window, glinting off of what appeared to b…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
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whaley started the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
I need to develop core strength if I’m ever going to get good at jiu-jitsu. Every time someone writes and posts 500 words on this thread, I will drop everything I am doing and hold a plank until I face-plant.
You can’t post something you’ve already written, it has to be new if you want me to suffer 😄
Also if anyone makes it to 5,000 words, I wil…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 months, 3 weeks ago
But as long as they’re not like, staring at the floor or clearly not even looking at me, then I’m not offended or anything.
You wouldn’t like talking to me then lol
Ok, jk I’m (probably) not that bad.
Yeah, it makes sense, and yes, I get why people value it. I think I’m just frustrated from working a customer service job…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@theducktator @freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @esther-c @theshadow @grcr
Crosshair
His eyes slowly opened to see stone walls.
Not an Imperial facility. Not his home, either.
But something tugged at his memory, like he’d been here before.
He sat up. “Feather?” he called, his scratchy voice echoing down the hallways. His wife didn’t respond.…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@theducktator @esther-c @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr
(I’m going to have Leon/Riker vaguely remember being here before, but it’s up to you as far as Crosshair goes, Keilah 😉)
Leon
Light crested down, in a direct line into his gaze. Leon groaned and rubbed at his eyes. Where was he? Cold stone walls…cold stone floors with mere…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@esther-c @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings
Ok, the subject of eye contact annoys me so much. I’ve been told that I don’t need to worry about it and that avoiding eye contact is just part of who I am, but I still want to be as kind and respectful as I can towards people. But also it frustrates me that people judge each other based off of what the…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@whalekeeper @keilah-h @theshadow @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @grcr
I might add someone else later, but for now I’m just doing one.
Ayla (I haven’t given her a last name yet)
Age:Â 15
Species: Human
Appearance: Ayla is 5′ 7”, with pale skin, thick wavy dark brown hair, dark brown eyes, and high cheekbones. She is slender, and typically…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@grcr @freed_and_redeemed @theshadow @theducktator @esther-c @whalekeeper
yeah I’m keeping Crosshair here because he’s been in here for what, three years now and I greatly enjoy writing him. Feather’s out though, just because I wanna stick with one character for now and might save the slot for a charrie from another WIP or something.
are we…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@grcr @keilah-h @theshadow @theducktator @esther-c
I suggested doing this RP again and then disappeared off the face of the earth🤪 sorry about that y’all
I honestly need to start trying to practice writing characters other than Leon/Riker, buuut I also need to write Leon/Riker 3rd book timeline as well…hmmmmmmm…I may still have to stick with…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months ago
I’ve made it a point in the past year or so to make eye contact when I’m listening to someone, but sometimes I start thinking of ways I’d describe their eyes in a book and stop paying attention to what they’re actually saying. 🫣😂
XD I used to trace people’s faces with different colors and try to figure out the dimensions of their face. L…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Your characters sound really interesting!!
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