Esther

@esther-c @mineralizedwritings

Thank you! Ill make that change and keep working on this one!

@esther-c

Oooo I really like that scene! =D
However I don’t have any feedback/suggestions for you right now, sorry.

@princesachronicle22

AH I MUST READ MORE XD
What creature is Anwyn?
sorry I don’t have feedback/suggestions for you either

@mineralizedwritings

Yeah I get that XD but I’m glad you liked the style!

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks, I’m not sure how to help me either so I understand XD. And yeah I get what your saying about the rock and light thing. It’s definitley good to know that from an outside perspective it doesn’t make sense XD because I know exactly what is happening…[Read more]

Oh, and @esther-c , I just read your scene and I really liked it! The sunrise description was really pretty.

@ligtoverdarkness6

Thanks!

@esther-c

ok, I’ll keep that in mind. The first book actually refers to something different from the other ones, the term afterthoughts is used to refer to a unwanted group of people, where as the other one literally mean thoughts. So maybe I should change it to m=not have parallel titles and instead have…[Read more]

@esther-c

Cool! You can be vague if you want. I am curious, but for the sake spoilers, I can be patient. I’m really bad at that, when I’m asked about something about my worldbuilding, even though it would be a spoiler, I just kinda dump it all out. I need to work on being more vague.

@esther-c

I will sign the petition!

@esther-c

That’s a really great point. So, Ami does know what the sun looks like and what sunrays are. The Orb simulates the weather in a way where it looks pretty real, but it regularly flickers, or doesn’t adjust to the weather outside. For example, weather can penetrate the Orb (like, rain can go through it), but the technology of the Orb was…

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@mineralizedwritings

I love those 😍😍!! Yes, I think it can work. It sounds good! 🙂

@esther-c

Aww I love the sunrise part! And sweet Ami…and Ev!!

Slowly, the sky grew lighter, and the edge of the sun began to peek over the horizon. The dew glistened in its light. It illuminated the sky with hues of rose, peach, and daffodil. The sunlight…

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Okay so if anyone is interested I have a snipit of a chapter I’ve been stuck on for a while, honestly it’s probably the unconcious guilt of making my characters suffer XD

So some of you may know Anwyn from the KP Library. But anyway, if anyone is interested in reading it (though it’ll be a little out of context) and could give me some ideas on…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @felicity

I’ve been thinking about the order of my books, how would this sound for titles?

Afterthoughts of Hate

Afterthoughts of a Releaser

Afterthoughts of The Left Behind

(Haven’t come up with a good title for the fourth yet…)

Honest opinions? Does it…[Read more]

@esther-c  @mineralizedwritings

Heres a new beginning to my book! Just let me know how you like it and if you see any errors. Thank you!

I ran down a row of almond trees. Their pink and white blossoms were open and each flower contributed to the sweet, woody perfumed air that was luxurious to breath in. Bark and sticks crunched under my bare…[Read more]

@esther-c

I love it! I think the descriptions are good, but I do have a few questions. How well simulated is the Orb’s sunrise? Would it look cartoonishly fake? Like a yellow spot going up and down, or does the Orb make it look far more like the real thing, and they just knew it was fake? If it look looks like a giant bright yellow dot that goes…[Read more]

@esther-c

Girl…

That scene…

Was…

AMAZING!!!! 🤩

I really enjoyed reading it and it kept me on the edge of my seat! Can’t wait to see what happens next!!! 😃✨

Aww thank you SO MUCH!!! Yeah it was nervewracking writing it…lol. Ah good! I’m so glad you liked it!! 🙂 ❤️❤️

@princesachronicle22

AHHH!!!! Dylan, Asher!!! That was so good girl!!!

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@esther-c

oh, just finished it!

He let her lead him to the circle the group had made. Ev stood next to Lukas. He ruffled his hair and smiled down at his little brother. Lukas looked up and frowned.

“What?” Ev whispered.

“I’m a teenager,” Lukas replied.

Ev grinned. “I know. I’m supposed to embarrass my teenage little brother. Right?”

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@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @whalekeeper @esther-c @anyone XD I guess everyone is off now…? XD

@esther-c

Thanks! I will defiantly tag you! As I told@mineralizedwritings , I might do another few scenes and compare them, the scene above might be to busy for the beginning. 😀

@esther-c yea I get that.

@whalekeeper XD XD!!! Welp the uhh death tradition probs isn’t fluff but the rest is XD XD

@esther-c OK!!!

So bear with me, I am new at this culture building stuff, and there is a lot of Praise in A’Grend’s culture…

(Sadly this does not mean A’Grend is perfect…a few of it’s people have become quite…troublesome, despite the efforts in plac…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @joy-calle (I KEEP NOT TAGGING U!) @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c so! Would y’all like to hear some of the culture worldbuilding I’ve done so far?

Mostly like their tradition on how they celebrate weddings and births, deaths, etc?

it might sounds confusing since I mos…[Read more]