Esther

@savannah_grace2009

Since I don’t know where you’re going with this, I can’t really provide a good opinion on whether you should keep it or not. It’s very different from any of your other drafts (which isn’t a bad thing!).

I would just say that if you’re going back to add more details about Andromeda, made sure you don’t get too info-dumpy,…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @grcr @ellette-giselle @theducktator

Thanks, y’all💜💜💜

And yes, the quote references Aadelheide…I didn’t kill anyone else that’s special to Leon, I promise. (errr…that doesn’t mean that no one dies in Book 3 tho🫠 so far at least 1 person dies in all 3 books, so uhhhh…yeahhhhh)

I am concerned about this “broken i…

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@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @theducktator @liberty @ellette-giselle

*sits back and watches as the chaos and questions unfold*

And yes, Liberty, Hans hates Jews and is the main villain of my first novel (and other novels as well…he’s the main villain in several of my WW2 WIP ideas).

and yes, Elishavet, Hans’ entire life has been pretty…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thank you! 🙂 I didn’t explore their friendship much in this RP before, but now y’all get the full benefit. XD

By the way, I’m always a little surprised at people’s reaction to Reúven. His arc was inspired by a character from a historical fiction series who is called a terrorist. And people call Reúven adorable. It’s hilarious, a…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Aw, they cuute.

@elishavet-pidyon

Yeah, you can join if the others are good with it!!

@ellette-giselle @koshka

You just killed me, I almost spit out my lunch 🤣😭 He just YEETED himself out of that bus like there’s no tomorrow

Barnes

Rory leapt up, and before anyone could stop him, he barreled out of the bus. He glanced back at Barnes before hurriedly r…[Read more]

@koshka @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

I’ll have to check, but I think Reúven is 16… Don’t be fooled by his cadet uniform. XD

Liora (+intro)

The bus slid to a stop with a loud exhalation from the brakes. The doors swooshed open. For a moment, no one entered, then a heeled shoe was heard on the step. A young woman in a red wool coat slid into…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Go right ahead!

@koshka @whalekeeper @koshka

This is random, but I loved the AU backstory my characters had in this RP. And I’m having so much fun reading this Leo+Rory+Barnes drama. They don’t have to interact with my characters, but I would like to “join” if that’s ok.

@koshka

@whalekeeper

oh boy. Rory hates you both right now. lololol

Rory

Rory had jumped when Leo grabbed him, but then the boy let him go and began talking to the woman. He said she wasn’t an agent. Well of course she wasn’t. Rory could have seen that immediately. However, she was someone linked with government, and it looked like she was…[Read more]

@koshka @ellette-giselle

Barnes

“Sh, not here.” She noticed the boy’s wide, unnerved gaze. She sighed and held out her school identification card. “I only look scary to ward off the real bad guys.”

The bus screeched to a stop, and the passengers shifted and headed on and off. The little group had an excuse to slip away. Barnes turned to Leo. “…[Read more]

@loopylin @anyone

First mood board in maybe a year. ;] I put it together quickly and it could use some rearranging and extra pictures, but this is a start. (All images from pinterest)

@koshka

@whalekeeper

Rory

A choking feeling of dread filled Rory and he stumbled to his feet, clutching Quincy to his chest. “Stay back!” he whispered. “Don’t hurt them, please!”

He glanced down the aisle. No one seemed to have noticed his movement. He darted a glance at Leo, his eyes pleading silently. Run Leo! Run!

@ellette-giselle

Lol. I have a world-class master watching my every move (I still can’t believe it sometimes), and you better bet he pushes everyone on the mat.

@koshka

Barnes

Standing behind the children’s bench, holding onto one of the bus poles, Barnes shielded her masked face with a cough as Leo looked around. She didn’t want to start…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Well don’t make your readers mad, and then they’ll get your aesthetic boards right. lol

Yeah, that’s better! Now I can see a picture that was blocked before. The man with his arms in the air. I think that cries redemption louder than the red text.

Good. Okay.

I didn’t realize how dark the text made it until I took it o…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

hmmmmm.

I’ll have to look through Sabina’s letters and see if I mentioned his age.

@whalekeeper

no prob!

I know what it feels like after grappling.

@linus-smallprint

Wow, thanks! Even got the purple eyes. Is that a crow on a horse in there? Did you put the hand in there for the his wizard scars?

You’re welcome!

Yes, that is a crow on the horse.

Yes, that is for the scars.

It feels a little too dark for Alan. It needs his bright and heroic side. I don’t see much of a desire to go on or b…

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@ellette-giselle

I’ll go! Give me a bit to settle myself irl; my body’s really sore from wrestling and I think I need a hot sock or something. XD