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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I’m going to be able to submit something!!!!!!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
I’m a sucker for the Aussie accent, lol.
Me too lolllllll
I’d probably react the exact same way in that situation haha.
what is it about them that we Americans find so fascinating??
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@keilah-h sorry for basically spamming you with art 😅
id love to see the art you did! What is your fanfic about? Is it the dragon one or something different?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Also, one thing I just thought of; we don’t really care about the characters’ families since we haven’t met them yet. Maybe it would be a good idea to lengthen the first chapter by showing Jack and Elina getting home and seeing their parents and siblings.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
This chapter does a good job building up the suspense! The only thing I would say is yeah, Ellette has a point. These girls seem to be so mean for no real reason that I can guess at yet. It makes them feel flatter, rather than like actual people who have motives and stuff for their actions. Their ultimate goal, especially in a…[Read more]
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Sorry, I have to send them separately or it won’t send

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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@keilah-h are my messages not coming through? I sent two but they aren’t showing up.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Sure! They’re in the entrance right now.
Vyette
Vyette glared up at the school. A boarding school! How could her father do this to her? “It’s an experience,” he’d said. An experience? Maybe for the working class. She shoved another bag at her maid, who was already carrying four. “Come on. Don’t take all day.” She stalked into the…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
i am so relieved Jack is still there!! Also, I have a feeling I’m going to like Dylan.
just a hunch.also, I’m not sure about Olivia and Adaline’s reaction. You see, when people bully others it tends to be because of insecurity and cowardice. I have yet to meet a truly confidant and courageous bully. That being said, they seem too c…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
I recommend a portfolio page, a contact form, and an ‘About Me’ page.
Sounds good! *takes note*
I might take you up on the help if stuff gets complicated.
(Though I should really make one for myself first.)
Lol. Yeah, that might be a good idea. Sounds like me trying to teach kids how to build a prayer life. Or sew.
Ah. Well if…
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Jaybird replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Oof, yeah technology can be it’s own personality sometimes. XD I will definitely look into the Lide and those programs.
Good to know! I guess any form of social interaction depends on the group. You want to connect on several levels, not just art form or values separately. I’m so thankful for KP. ❤️
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HighScribe posted an update 1 year, 7 months ago
Lit teacher: “…So after I punch their lights out, I reply…”
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HighScribe replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Thaliu. I liked the feel together.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@anyone This is long, sorry
Liko
At 6:00 am, while the school halls were still mostly quiet and empty, Liko arrived at work, holding a bucket in one hand. The contents of the bucket sloshed and jiggled at his side as he made his way to the supply closet. After setting the bucket down, he unlocked the closet door.
First thing’s first: clean the…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 7 months ago
Ducktator, did you see that note I added on the idea of using a slave to push Alan in the direction of trusting and obeying The Saviour? What are your thoughts on that?
I’m not sure. I see how it would help your story, and it’s an interesting perspective to take. My main concern would be people thinking you support slavery. I…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
That’s cool! Lol it’s funny cuz I was just thinking that a painting magic system would go good with one of my worlds. It’s not even the first time this has happened XD
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I want context.😂
She was talking about Pride and Prejudice. I don’t remember exactly. I’ll try and look over the class recording and find exactly what she was talking about.