Esther

@ellette-giselle

Oh sorry, I was thinking about one of my characters.

@ellette-giselle

🤣 That’s your theme song?! Okay, I can see the words fit well…but the style is so different! Imagine seeing pictures of your guys slide-showing through that song! I just find it funny, because the book’s feel and the song’s feel are so different.

It feels like having “Trouble” play at the end of Chosen season 1!!

@liberty

Who?

I’ve killed a lot……

Also, what do you think of the song?

@ellette-giselle

🤣😭 That is SO TRUE!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sobbing about one death in particular….*

@ellette-giselle

Huh. Your brain went to securing the definition of henchman, while I almost immediately looked for what else to do with them. Interesting.

*Logs into psychic database*

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint       @liberty

Look y’all, whatever you may think…. this is actually the truth.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint      @liberty

How about this one?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

For all those it may concern…. I would call this the theme song if this book.

@whalekeeper

Probably for doing dirty work. *shrug* basically completing tasks that the main villain doesn’t want to (or can’t)

@ellette-giselle

Lol, got it. What would you use Iskyagus’ henchmen for? I already said my first gut idea, but I bet you and Ducktator have different thoughts.

@linus-smallprint

Beautiful XD

@hybridlore     @linus-smallprint

Hey, that kind of stuff even happens here in America.

I took a class out of the home with several home school kids. It was a Constitutional class, and at one point we were debating real court cases or arguing pro or con real things.

Well, I was put on a team with three of the guys, (that class was heavily out…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Oh my goodness! That’s adorable!!!

@whalekeeper

Don’t have them there just for the sake of stupidity. Don’t make it look like all you want its stupidness and so you’re throwing in characters with the roll of being stupid.

They have to have a point and a reason.

@loopylin @elishavet-pidyon
Hugo
“Hi.” Hugo welcomed Lois in a friendly tone. “The outfit judgement from younger kids is real.”
A second later, a bell rang. It wasn’t the normal school bell, but a large one inside a grandfather clock in the library common room. The cartoon rabbit twisted from surprise, and his ears trembled.
“Oh gosh, I’ve…[Read more]

@loopylin @elishavet-pidyon

Having the boys in the same first class sounds like a plan to me. @whalekeeper what do you think?

I will see to it then. *Folds hands masterfully* Shall place them in a separate class from the one already starting, since I don’t want to deal with three of my POVs in one place.

I’m really annoyed for having taken so long, and I have to warn you guys that I might take days to respond. Lore drop for my life – I have a chronic illness now? *Rolls eyes* Seriously? That’s a bit of a distraction.

But let’s see if we can plop multiple characters into new locations while I’m at it.

@esther-c

Excuse me while I go DIE OF CUTENESS. I was literally hopping around squealing, and then ranted about it for five minutes to one of my sisters. Your couples are ADORABLE. I LOVE THEM.

 “You’re really pretty by the way. Most girls can’t pull off red, but it looks pretty rad on you.”

“For real,” her friend agreed.

“Is it natural?”

Hal…

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@linus-smallprint

I can totally see Iskyagus with abnormally featured henchmen, like animalistic things with extra limbs/beaks/heads or something. You could play into the creepy aspects of this, so they show off the evil side of magic, and contrast Iskyagus’ more eye-pleasing design.

@ellette-giselle

As long as they aren’t stupid. They can be f…

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@rae

Hallelujah! Baron is saved! 🥹😃🥳 It’s so beautiful!

Does this story feel preachy?

Did Baron’s redemption feel legit?

It felt legit and not at all preachy!