Esther

@hybridlore

Okay yeah, I can see what they think. I don’t really ever do “dead” characters coming back to life. That troupe drives me insane. I think I’ve only ever done it once.

I had another time when one character thought the other one was dead, but you were following both MCs, so you knew the truth. (kind of like with Julian and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

That’s funny! 😆 Yeah, I had no idea this was the last section, but then… once I read it, I was like, okay, that kind of works. But it was definitely a shock.

(For a reader with an actual copy of the book, it wouldn’t be, cause you’d get to see how many pages left. We’re kind of reading blindly on here. XD)

Yeah, that makes sen…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Big Yikes!

he made it though! 😅

I don’t think you intended this, but this is a little harsh. The way he said it, it comes across as challenging unbelief. Like Leon is saying, ‘Do any of you now dare to disbelief after what happened to me?’ I think it’s the way he starts the sentence. ‘Can any of you deny…’ This might no…

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@hybridlore

Yes. The end.

It snuck up on me too. 🤣 I scrolled to the next page and was like, “Oh! This is where I decided to break it!”

I feel like Marius and Prince Dietrich will come back. The way you left it, it does sound like an eyewitness saw their deaths, but… Why would you have cut the scene off so soon? It feels unfinished. If y…

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@ellette-giselle

The END????

I feel like Marius and Prince Dietrich will come back. The way you left it, it does sound like an eyewitness saw their deaths, but… Why would you have cut the scene off so soon? It feels unfinished. If you didn’t intend that, maybe you should make it clearer that they did die.

I don’t know, I guess I’m just used to…[Read more]

And this page is gonna blow up.

No one saw ANY of that coming.

😏

@rae

Thank you! I have a secret idea for using this color pallet again but it’ll take some practice. 😅

@grcr

Hey that’s very stylized! To be fair, roses are difficult to draw at the right angle, and I think you did a great job.

@the_lost-journal

*Gasp* How dare you

@hybridlore    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

@linus-smallprint   (I know you haven’t had a chance to get to yesterday’s, but I’m impatient. Sorry.) 😂

NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Night had fallen about the city, and the occupants of the palace were retiring to their rooms. Prince Dietrich had excused him…

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@liberty

You know what….. i need to stop having characters with varied spelling of the same name. Yes, this is Dietrich. Deidrich belongs to CR. 🙄

*pumping my fist in the air* This is Awesome!!

*claps hands excitedly*

This is so hilarious! He nonchalantly says those words and Julian and Aelic are shocked.

lolololol. I…[Read more]

@koshka

Well, I think that is where you and I differ in doctrine.

As a reformed Baptist I believe that women are not to teach or hold authority over men, so while much of what Leon said can be applied to the women, it will not be the same as the application the men will receive. If that makes sense.

I have no problem with women witnessing to…[Read more]

Credit to my older brother for suggesting drawing the little veins in the rabbit’s eye XD

@elishavet-pidyon @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h

Here it is!

@ellette-giselle

Diedrich said.

Um…its Dietrich?

“I can’t get up,” Julian moaned. “I need to take my boots off.”

I love these lines!

At that moment, Leon knew what he had been missing the whole time. “Yes,” he whispered.  “This is war.”

*pumping my fist in the air* This is Awesome!!

“Someone shot it at me last night.” He rose and stumbled to t…

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@whalekeeper

Wow! That’s cool, I like it! The olive green really brings out the red

Oh and credit where credit is due, I used a photo of a normal person for the face because I’m horrible at drawing faces, lol.

@rae that’s awesome!

Alriiight. This is… snaky lady. Redhead Medusa? I really don’t know. She was fun to draw though. ;P

I really liked the red, olive green and peach combo, so I went with that, and I’m probably going to do it again with another idea I had.

@elishavet-pidyon @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h

I drew the card. If I can, without Ezra seeing it, I’ll try to scan it into the computer and post it before his birthday.

Hopefully he likes it. My family thinks it’s great XD