Esther

Also, I signed up for Crazy Editing Week. It’s right after my school term ends, so I’m hoping to get some stuff done. XD

Is anyone else planning on doing it?

@whalekeeper

Yes!

I’m working over the summer, but it’s maintenance on a campground, so I expect to have an easier schedule than I now.

@hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @linus-smallprint @esther-c @liberty @theshadow @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @the_lost-journal @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @theducktator

Hey guys (well you’re mostly gals). Would you be interested in a goal-focused chat where we practice our individual writing skills and chat about…[Read more]

@theducktator

That’s vicious. And brilliant.

… I have. O_O It was okay. XD Not worth risking Natalian citizenship.

@theducktator

XD That would be daring.

@ellette-giselle

Oh no!!! Not Leon!!

Good section. One thing I noticed was that you mentioned that the people were able to find a lot of food during the winter… then you said that it had been hard on everyone, especially the wolves. I get that they eat meat and not plants, but it was kind of confusing.

otherwise, good job! 😬

@ellette-giselle

Dun dun duuuunnnn.

Nice! I really liked those last few chapters!

Notes…

Poor Julian. He’s a lonely little guy.

Night was falling fast and there was no shelter. They were hemmed in by high cliffs on either side, and the wind shrieked down the path.

This section made me think of Carahadras. Brrrrrrr.

…

Hmm. They seemed to…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

It’s digital art, which is definitely beyond me at best, so you get a gold star for that. ⭐!!

And now I can imagine him a bit better! You did a really good job capturing his character. I like it. 🙂

@liberty

Eh, he’s just 17. You can call him boy for another few years without it being weird. XD

Deductions…

He’s gentle and tender hearted. He has a strong faith in God and tries to share it with his friends, if he has any.

He loves nature and animal, especially birds. He likes to draw the world around him, and maybe has a special notebook…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Ok, that’s just beautiful! The pictures and messages are most of them sad/dark, but it’s so aesthetic that I keep coming back to look at it. You did such a good job bringing the different pictures together.

Love them both! The character claims do fit them very well.

Their stories are just… Sniff. I really want more Leon…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed  @hybridlore    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty  @linus-smallprint

NEXT SECTION!

The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
March 13th 
The Empire

We are all settled down inside a cave complex the Lord led us to. It has begun to really snow in earnest outside, but we have wood for a fir…

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@freed_and_redeemed

*shuts mouth and stews silently.*

🤣

No, it’s really good. You did a great job. 🥰

@rae
Felicity

“What? That’s the first time I’ve ever seen you smile! Don’t apologize. Smiles are contagious, you know.” She grinned at him, her silver eyes twinkling.

“What were you thinking about?”

@rae Dude you’re fine. RP whenever you want.
Also I just had an idea. What if, as Chase got closer to certain people, he started associating them in his mind with different animals depending on their personality? Could be a way he gets more comfortable around some people. Just an idea though. You can use if you want or not.

But any ways, Chase is…[Read more]

@loopylin

Sorry that I haven’t been active. I wasn’t sure what to rp, and there was alot of life stuff I was working with.

Chase

Chase shook his head. “Wha-what t-teach-er g-gives t-tree l-less-ons?” Besides, if you want to climb trees, you can talk to squirrels about it. They can tell you all kind of things about the different kind of trees…[Read more]

I shall also add: the brown eyed brunette being the gorgeous character who all the boys like. I’m fed up with every single AbSuLuTeLy GoRgEoUs character being a blue eyed blonde!

You all probably know what I look like now.

@the_lost-journal

“What did the people do with them…? Do you mean they were prisoners…? That makes sense.”

Huntress: Yeah, sometimes. Most of those were a while back ago though, I don’t remember all the details.

Was he just not there for the moment…? Or is he… ya know? dead?

Scout: Nahh, he wasn’t dead. We hadn’t met him back then.

&nbs…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Though I do know soldiers had to be clean shaven at that time…….. 🤭

Shhhh let me have my creative liberty😂🫶

@the_lost-journal

“I keep tracks of most of my kills… except for… I mean my hunting records! Every best that walks, crawls, slithers, flies, or swims this earth! It’s pretty fun!… I just don’t count the kills I have with… humans…”

Huntress: Well, his list of targets doesn’t mean we had to kill them. Some of them were runaways that needed to be…[Read more]