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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Wow.
I gotta say, it’s probably not as much of a shock as some of the other deaths, since it really felt like you were leading up to this… but still.
Keilah has a good point. I do like how you made it more hopeful at the end, and the time jump is really interesting. It’s cool to know what happened afterward.
I’m glad Rowan b…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle That makes sense.
I was surprised to find I liked it too!! It’s just a really satisfying end to this story somehow.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Wow really?! I’m glad you liked it!!
I like the time skip too. Oh. Odd. The original one has reference to WWI-II. It must have gotten lost when I was editing. Well, I kept adding greats, and it was getting stupid, so I cut it off at 3. About late 1300s to early 1400s is when I’d place the stories.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I love this ending!! I was worried with how dark it was looking, you were gonna leave it off on a less satisfying note. But the Fox journal was hopeful, and I honestly love how you time-skipped it into modern times. Which, interestingly, makes it seem more real to me, the fact that these places would still exist in the world we…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Hmm, that could work. I’ll try that.
Oh wait, what if he’s describing the painting and he was like, “it was from one of the kingdoms that has knights, obviously not here,” or something like that.
Or does that not work.
I don’t know if that similarity between Leon and the prince was intentional or not, but try to pay a…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
So my dad just finished your report for Alec last night. Would you like me to email it, or copy and past it here?
Also, I just shut down my google account, and when I did, I realized I can no longer access you book! Is there a way I can do that without google?
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ryry's profile was updated 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @linus-smallprint
Okay all. Ready, set, here we go!
NEXT SECTION!
Leon and Julian did not go back to sleep that night. They spent the remainder of those dark hours in prayer for their friends, the other believers, and even their enemies. They…
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Do whatever. I’m not sure really what to rp atm, since I don’t think Kepha has rped to my last rp.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I’ll jump on board any time.
Though, I don’t think Andrew will be able to since he will be gone almost all summer.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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HighScribe posted an update 1 year, 3 months ago
I’m sixteen today!! 😁
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HighScribe replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
Praying for you guys <3
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HighScribe replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I’ll help any way I can (:
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Thanks. I might!
I know!!!!!! I’m a terrible author!!! 😱😭
Wait a sec…… isn’t it my goal to make the reader miserable? 😈🤣
I promise to send the next section today. Right now. I’m running final edits this very moment.
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Should the rabbit lead Mel and Barnes back to your characters, or not yet?
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
If you didn’t know, this is the roleplay Jonas started. I personally loved this roleplay idea and it would be nice to continue.
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Enid replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Is there something you’re struggling with that requires some brainstorming? What was that epic plot idea and why did you like it? I don’t mind helping. I like brainstorm sessions, lol.
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