Esther

@elishavet-pidyon

I decided I loved it when Kyler sent Jace flying into the mystery visitor. XD

😂 Yay!

There were several places where either the syntax or word choice made the little reading voice in my head stumble, so I’ll come back and note those,

Great! I will look forward to those. I actually went over the doc and changed some of those t…[Read more]

@liberty

Ok, critiques/comments to come later, but I was able to sit down and read through it for now. I love it! I decided I loved it when Kyler sent Jace flying into the mystery visitor. XD

There were several places where either the syntax or word choice made the little reading voice in my head stumble, so I’ll come back and note those, but…[Read more]

Father figures are so often my favorite character and yet they always end up dead. 😭

@keilah-h

Hmmm…I really like Father Nicolas from a rather dead wip. I’m also writing a dad by the name of Lotan Linder. I like him so much he just avoided dying where he originally was going to die. I haven’t figured out how yet, but the one character who has two loving and living parents gets to keep them. Also Ryla’s grandfather…he’s weird…[Read more]

@rae @theshadow you two are probably the only ones who will find this funny

So I’m currently writing a version of the story I shared with you guys, but from Sniper’s perspective; it’ll start from shortly before he joined the team and continue throughout everything. I decided to include an intro similar to the one Huntress has in her version of…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

😆 I’m excited to hear what you say!

Don’t worry…I sometimes miss things too.

idk who this guy is but he looks a little like my profile picture lollllll

@liberty

Oh, I just saw this and decided to investigate. XD (Now I really wish I checked my notifications more often. Lol) Sorry it took me so long. And I won’t be able to read through it until later today or tomorrow. 😢 Still, so excited!

Liberty’s Rangers story!!

@ellette-giselle

Oh, lol.

@loopylin

XD Me too.

I like science well enough. I really liked Geology and Radiology. (Lots of elements causing drama together.) Hence my choice of lecture. XD

I can think up ideas for the expirement… Identifying minerals by the color of their rubbings, whether they glow in the dark, how they break, how hard they are, and if they fiz when a…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oh. Duh.

I was thinking in response to Jonathan falling. I didn’t even think of the other chapter.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah…. Totally. *shakes head vigorously *

His backstory. First time we get to hear what happened to him.

@hybridlore

What?!?! But Rick is so sweet and nice!!

*stares at you with total deadpan face*

Poor Jim? Why poor Jim?

Thanks so much!

@ellette-giselle

Augh! Really??

Rick is not a nice guy. 😠 And poor Jim!!

I love the dynamics you have going.

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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

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@theducktator

No worries! Thanks for getting back to me, though.

Great! From the three POVs, how would you describe those three fellows? Zahn, Kyler, and Guy.

@elishavet-pidyon XD love it when the quiet characters have a secret explosive temper.

I am very much struggling to think of what the experiment should be, sorry. I failed chemistry two years in a row in school so I’m not really the best at this lol

@loopylin

Lol. Yeah…

XD If we get someone to twit him about the right thing, something would blow…

He’s usually a bit shy: a bit excited to meet people, but more than a bit uncomfortable with all the nuances he picks up on in situations. (Or thinks he does. Sepf-focused/self-conscious issues there) He’s used to getting picked on and…[Read more]