Esther

and then after a little while or a few posts, it returns to normal.

does anyone else notice that KP sometimes goes into weird formatting? I was trying to post a picture here and it did exactly that. I’m trying to figure out if it happens at a specific time or something, or if it’s just random.

@the_lost-journal
Praying!! 🙏

@liberty

Do you have an actual game this is based off?

There were several games like this medieval children played, and later on they evolved to Jacks and Marbles. So in a way, yes.

Aww!!!😍 I love this part!

Me too! So glad!!

I’m pretty sure Aelic is remembering the priest from his town when he says this…and how that guy wanted to sac…

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@librty

“Shooting stones” sounds like something along the lines of marbles, maybe?

@ellette-giselle

shooting stones

Do you have an actual game this is based off?

“A story of a great warrior hero who loves children and saves his bride,” Julian repeated. He looked at Roland who gave him a smile. “I think I know just the story.”

Aww!!!😍 I love this part!

“You do that,” Aelic replied coldly.

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@ellette-giselle exactly!

@keilah-h

Well thank you!! Children characters always drive me insane. I dislike them so much because they are written so badly. We either have super tall toddlers or super short adults.

It’s something I really try to get right, so thanks for mentioning it!

@ellette-giselle You wrote children as, well, children. It’s the same in your other books.

So many writers write kids as if they’re little adults.

@keilah-h

Really? How so?

@ellette-giselle yes!

That was a great little addition and helped me get even more immersed in the world.

@keilah-h

I’ve always found that a wonderful way to connect with children and help them understand. I’m glad you liked it.

@ellette-giselle I love how they shared the gospel with the children by telling them stories, and then explaining that the stories were true! That was probably my favorite part of this section.

@rae

Though, our rp is also plagued with a specific mentally unstable grumpy pants called Alpha.

Not to mention a love-stricken pyromancer who obviously likes fire, and fights.

hopefully that means Andrew will like what I have to offer lol. I got a whole race of fire-obsessed creatures (although only two make an appearance) and mentally unstable…[Read more]

@liberty

Oh, sorry for devastating you.

Hmmm. We’ll have to wait and see.

Did you see the section I posted today?

@ellette-giselle

I totally thought you’d be at me for separating them, but I guess you didn’t mind Rolf dropping out of the book.

I was devastated, but it works better with them getting split apart.

So, Rolf never shows up again?

@ellette-giselle

Awesome, thank you!!

@hybridlore

YAY!!!

I just read it and left you some notes!!

@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!

The days passed, and Leon threw himself whole heartedly into the work. At first, the idea of completing at task well for someone who owned him was revolting. But after one long evening of prayer, Leon felt in his heart what was right, and…

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