@esther-c
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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Thanks!!
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Esther posted an update 2 years, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Hey! Just wanted to let you know that I’ve been reading through your WIP lately. I think I’m gonna try to read through the whole thing then come back with critiques. So it might be awhile before you get any feedback. Idk. I’ll try to read fast tho and get to the parts you were concerned about. (:
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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Alrighty!! The promised first two chapters! Any feedback is welcome 🙂
Chapter 1
“Wait a coup?”“Shh, keep your voice down.”
“Hold on, start over.” Everton Barlowe stared down his older brother.
Asher sighed. “Did you not listen the first time?”
“I was stuck on the word ‘coup.’”
Another sigh. “Okay.” Asher tossed dark strands of hair off hi…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Sorry if it’s a bit blurry
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Oh and yes, Amir was.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Ok!! Thanks (:
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Sorry for the momentary spamming… XD
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
And finallyyy…
Adrian

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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Amir

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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Hallie

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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @beth-torres @anyone-else-sticking-around
I am agonizing over who to add and literally cannot choose, so I’mma let y’all pick. XD
Options… (and I am more than willing to add two)
Easton

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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Lukas
“Wh-what? Did you, um, say-say something?” He searched her face.
“Nothing.” She smiled and shook her head.
Lukas frowned. He knew what she had said… “Why you?” He repeated, his voice low and tender. “Because—” he sighed. “I’ve never had anyone in my life who was more than a friend, but if I did, I know you’d be the…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic I'M BACK BABY!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I’m not sure if you can even tell what I was trying to say up there. The number of typos is so cringe! XD I just never post from my phone because my phone browser hates KP for some reason 👀😂
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @rae
Lukas shocked EVERYONE!!! *evil laugh* 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
He can run into Fynn… but I don’t know what would happen then. XD He can wait for Lukas to come back. 😉
Ooh, love it. I’m game.
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Esther replied to the topic I'M BACK BABY!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Ignore the many typos…..
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Esther replied to the topic I'M BACK BABY!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
AHHHHH!!!!!
I’ve been waiting to write that tage again for a whileeee!!! So glad you’re backkkk!!!!! 🥳🥳😆😆🎉🎉🎂 (Wow, I nee use that many emojis XD)
Anywho… Yeah so um Ev didn’t ask Ami to the dance–sorry!–but they are so gonna get back together at the dance cuz there is like zero chemistry between Ev and Falon rn. XD (I think…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
If Fynn or Ev ever hear about this… 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
You ready for this…
Lukas
Hesitantly… and tenderly… Lukas brought Liv’s hand to his lips and brushed a gentle kiss across her knuckles.
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Oh okay! Thanks! (:
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