Elly

@Jenwriter17 okay so I don’t want to go into full editor mode and scare you (been there, done that, it was bad xD) so what exactly are you looking for critique on? The general overall chapter? Or some more details like showing vs telling, etc.?

@Jenwriter17 thank you so so much for organising this and it was a heap of fun to do it. *throws confetti* Thanks again. 😀

@Dekreel all the reasons I blog can be summed up into one reason: I’m building relationships.

Part of the relationship building is to have a platform, but even that is a matter of building a circle of friends who will help you and encourage you and whom you can help and encourage.

I don’t blog for myself. I blog to make relationships. To meet…[Read more]

@SleepwalkingMK Hehehehe…. 😎

@Rochellaine

The Bible mentions the fact that demons had children by human women, who became giants and monsters

Whoa, wait, where was that?

@Ariel-Ashira Oh man, I can sympathize with the whole “major changes, God’s guidance” thing. I’ll pray for you and your family, dear. Hope everything turns out well.

@Dekreel I think the reason a lot of us blog is to build a platform for when we get published. That’s part of the reason I do it. The other part is because people tell me I’m mildly entertaining, and I figured I’d better take advantage of that while I can. 😉

@dekreel I have heard of that movie. I haven’t watched it yet, but I really want to.

adjective
 
1.
relating to or denoting an imagined place or state in which everything is unpleasant or bad, typically a totalitarian or environmentally degraded one.

Ooh, I love this idea!

I write in science-fiction, dystopian, and fantasy. Sometimes all at once. 😉

@warrenluther04 That’s fine.

@Dekreel EVERYTHING should be done over pizza. I agree with this characterized version of myself. XD

@Jenwriter17 yes same! I thought of that too actually.

Something else I thought of was that the king just handed over his signet ring to his second in command (now Mordecai) and like DUDE, DIDN’T YOU EVEN LEARN??? I mean, luckily it was fine, but still. XD

@Rochellaine That. Is. So. Messed. Up. Good gravy. I’ll definitely be praying for you guys, and I’m glad everything is working out alright.

@Daeus Hey, not sure how I missed it, but I was just reading back through several pages of this thread and I saw the request you made about depression. It really struck a bell, because I’ve been feeling…[Read more]

@Dekreel

@that_writer_girl_99 Oh, dear. Sympathy is not really my strong suit. Maybe it will get better? It will probably get better. Yeah, it will get better.

Boy, I wish I knew more about this.

I suppose though this isn’t much different from coming up with a brand new story idea though, is it?

I might follow a process like this.

• Get #1 really…

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Yo, I just became an Eccentric Mentor.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Oh gosh, I feel ya. This has happened to me several times, except it was my plot that left the characters nonexistent, not the other way around. So lessee:

First of all, are you completely positive that Evyn’s role in the story needs to change? If the entire plot hinged on her being a royal, then perhaps it would be better to…[Read more]