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Hm.. @shannon I like playing worshipful pieces from bands/artists like Hillsong, Kari Jobe, Chris Tomlin, and others.

@warrioroftherealm Ah! How did you know that old English is my weakness?

I think your big help here is that most people don’t equate dinosaurs with dragons. If they do, well, good for them. They probably aren’t going to have a problem with your fantasy creature.

Hi @shannon,

I live in Ohio and love it, but I do really like Texas as well. Well, the green parts, that is.

Most of my comments are either about word choice or sentence re-structuring. I don’t know if that helps…

Overall, the story is good! I love the concept.

@shannon Welcome to KP! Glad you found us. 🙂

So cool that you play guitar. So do I, and I sing too! Doing both at the same time is tons of fun.

Do you like writing short stories or poems?

@SeekJustice yay, good luck! 😀

@ClaireC I’d be happy to give you some feedback! Two points first though:
a) I can’t actually comment, as you’ve got the settings as ‘view only’ (you can change these fairly easily though using the drop-down menu next to where you got the link from)
b) How much feedback would you like? 😛 I naturally wouldn’t want to do a full edit since it’s just…[Read more]

@PerfectFifths ah yep. XD That makes much more sense. 😛

@SeekJustice I’m editing/critiquing a story for a friend. 😀

@PerfectFifths *waves at your cat* 😛
Ah yes we must be in different time zones then, because I think it was three something when you said you were leaving. *nods*

@SeekJustice Claire left, but I’m still here. 🙂

@ClaireC Welks! Any time. 😀
Great job!!! I got a chapter or so of critiquing done.

@ClaireC excellent. ^-^ Same here.

@ClaireC Sure am. *waves*

@SeekJustice okie dokie byeeee. *waves*

@PerfectFifths *squints* Either you’re in a different time zone than me or this is a late lunch. XP

@PerfectFifths Eyyy welcome!! 😀