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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
I really like this scene!!!
Some ideas for plot twists:
Maybe she apologizes to Albert or something?? And then realizes that she does like him? Or something happens with her and Chester? OR A NEW BOY MOVES TO TOWN!!
Sorry, all my ideas seem to be centered around romance….lol
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Livia
She stood there for a moment. “Um…I’m not sure how to do this.”
“Yeah, me neither,” Lukas laughed a little, “I was kind of hoping you would know.”
“Well, I don’t.”
“Oh.”
“We should watch the other people, and maybe we’ll figure it out?” Liv raised an eyebrow, and Lukas nodded.
They studied Fynn and Callista for a good…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Hey, my little sister’s name is Hallie!! XD
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Sara replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Sef
She flinched back at the man’s voice.
It reminded her of too much….
No. She would not think about Iver now….
Cowering back into the shadows, she hoped he wouldn’t notice her. Or ask her any questions.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
I’ll be praying for you guys! I’m sorry it’s been so rough.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@esther-c Hey! Sorry I meant to respond to this when I saw it, but I got distracted with other stuff xD.
The first ones probably my favorite. The second one feels a little abrupt… almost, if that makes sense. But I think they both work!
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Sara and Keilah H. are now friends 11 months ago
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Sara replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @esther-c
Thanks guys, it really helps me to know that I can talk to you guys <333
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Sara replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
Sorry, I keep misspelling it….XD
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
If you want, I could add Sef if calyhuge’s character doesn’t fit him. Sef knows pain, she’s been abused and would probably relate to him. she too has skeletons in the closet that she doesn’t like to talk about…so yeah….
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
I can’t wait for the next part! I don’t really have many ideas for plot events, but I’ll let you know if I think of any good ones! Yeah, probably reading other books like it would help.
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Sara posted an update 11 months ago
Guys I just finished the Atonement Child by Francine Rivers and it destroyed me emotionally…
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Ohhh, I’ve heard of her and heard she’s really good. Maybe I’ll have to pick up one of her books… 👀
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@esther-c
You should! but whatever you do, do NOT read Redeeming Love. I read some reviews and it’s really not a good book and talks about really not-so good things. At least for our age group-
Ah ok. Thanks for letting me know. (:
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@esther-c
I’ve never read it…but my mom told me to trust her and just not read it…so yeah.-
Oh yeah. Mother knows best. 😉
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Sara replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
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Sara replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
@traiblazer
WYOH!!! IT’S ALL YOUR FAULT!!!
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Sara replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Someone needs too keep an eye on those two…*looks suspiciously at Rae and Jonas*…things get crazy when they’re left unsupervised!!!
I read every page since page 11 because I had to know what the heck you guys were talking about lol
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Sara replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
@trailblazer misspelled your tag XD
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Sara replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
@traiblazer
I know exactly what it feels like to be a third wheel!!!
I completely relate to this XD
Thanks for everything <333
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Sara replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Livia
An instructor came to the front of the room, and Liv nudged Lukas with her arm. “Oh gosh. It’s starting. I’m literally gonna die.”
Everyone else okay with dance lessons starting??
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
I feel like Sef could relate to Chase. Though she’s Lilitu’s girl, since KP is technically an alternate universe for our charries, we could have them “fall in love”, at least for this RP.
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