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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
1. Is it boring?? I’ve been really scared that this doesn’t draw you in and isn’t interesting.
Nope!
2. Is Sef relatable? Can you really feel her and does she become real in your mind?
Yes, she’s definitely relatable!
3. Was there anywhere that you were confused?
Hmm, I don’t think so, since I’ve read most of to before, but I d…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@esther-c Wow! I really like it so far! It pulls you in really well, and I like the cliffhanger type chapter endings. I’ll try to answer the questions!
1. Were you drawn into the story right away?
Yep!
2. What are your first impressions of these characters? (Specifically the MCs. I know some of y’all already know these charries, but just p…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Oh my goodness!!!!! I am so happy for you, and so proud of you! I am so lucky to get to know you as a friend on here, and I’m celebrating right with you, girl!! You have to let me know how editing/publishing goes!!!
Well, Pitts are explained later in the book, same with Rippak and Godede Waters. I didn’t want to explain everything…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @smiley @esther-c @rae @hybridlore @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @acancello @mineralizedwritings @vinagirl
Okay, I really have been working on this chapter a bunch, and I would like to know you’re guys’ thoughts! I know some of you guys have read this chapter, but I was wondering if you had any…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
I would be such an emotional wreck 😭😭😭 LIKE FINISHING A NOVEL!!! THAT IS SO AMAZING!!
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Girl I love Ami and Ev!!! I love Ev’s personality, I wish I had a friend like him XD
1. Were you drawn into the story right away?
I kind of agree with Min, it seemed really abrupt, and I was a little confused at first. But the action also made me want to see what happened next, so it drew me in, but only because I was confused and…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
OH MY GOSH GIRLLLLLLL!!!! I AM SO HAPPY FOR YOU!!! I LITERALLY FREAKED OUT WHEN I READ THAT YOU’RE FINISHING THE EPILOGUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHH!!! <333
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Idk…I just feel like that way has much better writing and is just more emotional XD
if I’m being completely honest here… sometimes hooks are overrated…. 👀😂
lol!
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Aww that was so sweet I love it!!
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Sara replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
I’ve literally been so excited all week XXD sometimes I’ll see it and think I missed it, and freak out, then be like, oh wait, we still have a day left lol
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Thank you so much <333 It makes me so happy when people compliment my writing, especially when I’ve been really insecure about it and worrying that it’s not good and I should just quit XD
And yeah, I love that scene too 🙂 thanks for reading!!
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Sara replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
We posted the times earlier in this thread if you don’t know what time.
I put it on my calendar so I wouldn’t forget XD
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Sara replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Are you guys excited to break the record tomorrow???
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Or maybe #Albie?
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
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Sara replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Oh my gosh Nae is so cute <333 XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@trailblazer Aww!!! 🥰 Yeah, I’m team Albert and Libbie.
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Thanks for understanding!! 🙂 and thanks for supporting me <3
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
I know….I think Wyoh’s going too far…
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hybridlore replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
That sounds good, I’m glad you were able to get a clear answer from God! I agree, I think it still definitely works even without the shorter beginning. And even if it does turn some readers away, it’s going to touch the people God wants it to. 🙂
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