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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Honestly…
I have an idea….
ignore that first chapter lol
I HAVE A PLAN *maniacal laughter*
WHY DO I CHANGE IT SO MUCHHHH lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I don’t know how a four year old thinks hahaha
honestly I had really deep thoughts for a little kid and I have always thought really complex, so it seems realistic to me XDXD
I will work on it!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@anyone-who-is-interested
Chapter 1
Strong hands grabbed at her shoulders, trying to rip her away.
But Sef wouldn’t let go.
Eyes scrunched shut, tears leaking from the corners, she clung to her father like he was the only thing keeping her life together.
In a way, he was.
And now he was leaving.
“Let go, Sef,” her mother said stern…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 5 months ago
@the_lost-journal This sounds like a super cool idea! Unfortunately, I don’t think I’ll participate this time—I’m already not really keeping up with the fantasy RP—but I may check in on it to watch what happens.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
@grcr Praying as well!! *virtual hug* 🤗
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle I love that idea too!! 🥰
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hybridlore replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
It really depends. Does each MC have their own POV? How long is the series, and what genre is it? Typically a long, multi-book series will have plenty of characters, while a standalone may only have room for a few. (However, Gordon Korman is a big exception to this rule. He writes mostly standalone contemporary MG fiction, but he…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@liberty Awesome!! You and Kefa with all the KP fan fiction. It’s a really cool idea. Tag me if you post more!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle They’re all Christians??
Where do you find all your pictures for these?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle Aww, I love it!! She looks so sweet.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@esther-c @liberty @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 SNOWBALLS!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle OOH! Looks cool! 😁
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@liberty I would say yes, but it’s kind of fun to watch as they multiply from the original two, and eventually we’ll get to the point where we have a lot flying. So no, sorry. You’re welcome to ask for tags though.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I guess I was sort of confused by Joseph’s fears about talking to Ezra, then. He seems to have multiple flashbacks to the soldiers, which is a good way to show how the events have affected him. I was probably confused (I’m assuming now that this scene is replacing the one before where he talks to three young men) about why he was…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle Your new blurb sounds so cool! 😍
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I like it a lot! The only things I noticed were that you included the long excerpt from the Bible again… most readers already know the Christmas story so I don’t think you need it in there. Then, also, when Amelia was talking about Mary, some of the tenses seemed wrong. Like, maybe it should be in past tense? Idk. And last thi…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
We need a “pin post” option.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
That definitely makes sense. When there’s one big group, it’s kind of hard to RP. I’m up for it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle Haha I use my phone a good amount of the time. 🤪 It does take some getting used to.
Lolol, that should be the official video of the forum. 😆
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@liberty I think Ellette meant to tag you for her answer ☝️
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