Ellie Wingfeather

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha.

Love the section! Mainly just a few typos. The orphans are so sweet, and Asher found a girl! 🥰 Poor Beric and Liam, though. 🙁

@theshadow

Another question I have for y’all that’s more personal is if you’ve ever gone through a stage in your faith journey where you start questioning/doubting what you’ve been taught. Feel free to not answer this question though.

When I was about fourteen, (2ish years ago), out of nowhere —or what it seemed—I started having doubts about every…[Read more]

OH and I need some chapter title ideas for this section as well!

@esther-c

(tagging some other peoples too) @ellette-giselle @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else

Okay….

I have come to a decision lol

I’m keeping the prologue the same, but I’m tweaking a few things with the beginning.

Here’s the new first chapter (it opens when Sef is sixteen years old) Don’t worry, I’m going to edit it and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

True.

Okay, that makes more sense. But why would William want to do that? What’s out there beside Ardenta? I get he’s coming from an emotionally unstable place, but it seems sort of random.

@theducktator

Oh I forgot I posted that lol

you’re fine!

@theshadow

oh my goodness

girl

that was literally amazing

I’m like speechless

@esther-c

I have no idea lol

ummmmmm where was the last time we RP’d???

*saves snowballs*

Throws two at @esther-c and @whaley

To everyone who threw snow at me:

I haven’t been on here in a hot second, sorry everyone!!!! Ahhh….

I actually did a TON of editing today, and I’m so obsessed with my writing!

I’m not going to post the part I worked on on KP, just because I feel like it could be too dark for some people (Idk though…) I promise it’s not super dark, but a…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

WHAT

GIRL

Your writing is so good!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHH!

@ellette-giselle

Good section! And I like the boards. I’m interested to see what will happen now that they’re in the city again.

Two things:

The first thing that I noticed was… I forgot who William was. I thought he might be one of Amelia’s brothers 🫣, but I wasn’t sure. I think, with the amount of characters we have, especially the ones we’v…[Read more]

@theducktator

Praying!!

@esther-c

Okay! Just wanted to make sure you knew. 🙃

Let’s try that again. @highscribeofaetherium

@theshadow Yes, fifty words per snowball. 😉

@esther-c LOL.

@everyone (@highscribeofaetherium) I can also take snowballs now that my stock is all out . . .

@esther-c

Also, you forgot to blur out your last name. 😬 Unless you meant to leave it in there, I just know you had blurred it out before when posting the cover. But it might not let you edit anymore.

@esther-c

Yay, it’s out!! 😁

Hmm… @kyronthearcanin, @keilah-h, @jonas, and @liberty might also be interested.

@theducktator

Cool! I’ve been wanting to read that for a while!