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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Yes! Get Jim! Lol.
Just a guess. Can’t remember if we talked about this before, but I distrust characters’ “deaths” unless I get 100% proof that they’re dead because of all the “resurrections” in books, lol.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Lol, yes, that may be stupid of Jonathan. But it makes a good story.
I kind of feel like 314 (was that the right number) isn’t really dead. We never got much evidence besides the Agent telling us he was. He could have easily run away or something. But we shall see.
Good chapters! Jim taking care of Jonathan was hilarious.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle @theducktator @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @keilah-h
It’s Tuesday again! Two new chapters on whichever document you prefer.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Oh, lol.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Yeah…. Totally. *shakes head vigorously *
His backstory. First time we get to hear what happened to him.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Augh! Really??
Rick is not a nice guy. 😠 And poor Jim!!
I love the dynamics you have going.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Hah! so there was a time jump!
Called it 😉
So the memories are coming back for Jonathan…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
I don’t know yet. 😂 Probably not great, but I mean at least the others are accepting him.
Okay!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Good chapters! Nice to see Jonathan getting to see more of what the gang does. It seems like he’s becoming a full member.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year ago
I’ll be praying!! Have fun at volleyball!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Aw, poor Jim. I liked this section.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year ago
After discovering that dragons aren’t as immortal as they seem, a corrupt monarchy attempts to take over the world–however, the children they kidnapped turn against them and keep interfering with their devious plans.
This is for a new novel I’m brainstorming.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year ago
OMC I LOVE EVERYONE’s
A group of traumatized teens fight to stop a group of pathological liars from taking over the world, while fighting the intrusive thoughts to become pathological liars themselves.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle @theducktator @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper @keilah-h
Two new chapters!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Wow. Poor Lucille.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Got it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Jim giving Jonathan shoes. It was a sweet ending.
Ohh, right. But other people, maybe.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Aww. That was sweet.
Jim seemed nicer to Jonathan before these chapters, but I guess Jonathan was hidden and Jim didn’t have to worry about the others watching.
Did the gang have something to do with Jonathan’s parents dying?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Okay that makes sense…I’ll keep reading and waiting for more and I’ll let you know if I come up with anything else!
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