Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle @koshka
Fabulous! (Co-author hopping in) That’s very helpful.

I will say, the parents do not work for the government. The organization is a “private investigation” style thing separate from all governments like the Pinkertons, although they have worked alongside governments in time of need. (They are connected to the Witness…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ah, that makes sense. The problem of which country would have legal authority was the part that stumped me, and I figured Canada, which leads to nothing because I know nothing about Canada.

@ellette-giselle

What do you think of it as? The meaning?

I don’t know. It’s a cute name to me. 😂

@ellette-giselle

Great sections!

Rory is such a cute name. I love that scene. 😂

@ellette-giselle

I don’t have an account where I made it, so I don’t think that would work.

@linus-smallprint

Okay, thanks though. Neither do I.

*Uncertain laughter*

@stephie

Hmmm, not a bad idea. I’ll look into that.

@ellette-giselle

Alrighty. =)

Also not certain exactly how an ongoing murder investigation would pan out/effect things, when there’s no clear suspect or solid evidence besides the dad’s work (Parents were…[Read more]

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I was reading a different book on my phone. 🙃

@ellette-giselle

Wow. Didn’t expect that.

Great twist!!

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So there’s two rebellions? Didn’t realize that.

@ellette-giselle

Well. That was sad.

Poor Amber… and poor Ron. 😢

So was Nathan one of the rebels? And did 210’s explanation mean that the government is on to them? I wasn’t sure if I was reading that right.

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters. Nice touch of action towards the end! And that was a good cliffhanger. 😬

@ellette-giselle

All right. I won’t push it any further on my end, as I don’t want to turn this into a point of division. But yeah, I probably won’t read your second book, as I would be too distracted by this issue. Thank you for understanding and respecting my position.

As an aside, it might be interesting if you added a character like me to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

With all that said, I still am trying to figure out all that I believe and why I believe it on these issues. This is also why I want to hear what you have to say for your side, to see if I should maybe reconsider my side, as I am doing with passifism. And maybe in exchange, I can give you a few things to think about…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

As for the church leaving… they did. They left the city, but there is no place to run to, and while they did go underground, there is still the fact that 1. the will be discovered, it’s only a matter of time, and 2. evil is running rampant and unchecked.

Okay, that makes sense.

Read the Crown and Covenant Tri…

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@ellette-giselle

Is a POV blind spot bad?

Nah, not really. Depends on how you handle it. Females are 50% of the population and many of them must be firstborns. We know very little about them. It’s a world building thing, and you’ve had to choose where to spend your effort, so it’s not surprising you haven’t included them.

If you wanted to, all…[Read more]

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*Cries in a corner*

@ellette-giselle

Thanks for letting me know lol.

@elishavet-pidyon

Ah, another classical music lover! (The lack of classical fans is alarming). I love classical, and somehow enjoy rock as well XD. Thank you, Paul’s passage is very applicable here.

You mentioning rock and rebellion reminded me of one boy who, before converting, loved heavy m…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle ^^

Yes, I think he’s going to do that.

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I commented after I finished the third one. 🙃

@ellette-giselle

Wow. This is getting intense.

Good chapters!