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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
To be honest, it doesn’t really matter either way. I was just surprised at that sentence in the book because I’d never thought of it that way before. You might throw other believers off too, or maybe I’m the only one… I don’t see it  as a big problem.
Yeah 😆 I should probably change it. It just looks so cozy in there. . . *meanw…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Yeah, it makes sense. It’s just interesting. If God sacrificed animals in place of Adam and Eve so they didn’t have to die, why wouldn’t the Bible just say that? All it says in Genesis is that he clothed them with skins.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Don’t worry, Julian is having all the same questions as you most likely are.
I can tell 😂
Interesting. I didn’t know animals were killed in Adam and Eve’s place, even though I knew about sacrifices later. Where is it referenced as the first sacrifice?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I’m so sorry I didn’t get back to you yesterday! It was such a chaotic day and I didn’t get home until 8 pm.
I really like the way you handled their conversion through the journal entries! It was cool. Leon was a gladiator?? 😅
God slew two animals in [Adam’s and Eve’s] place.
Um, when was this?
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Whoops, thanks for catching the tag lol. Also thanks!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
It’s ok! I’m prone to rambling myself.
It’s my understanding that charging by the hour per work is typical. So paid by the hour, but within the confines of the specific illustrations.
However, I would probably charge per illustration for just on here. (Which would be the only illustration jobs I would probablybd doing for a…[Read more]
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TheShadow started the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Hello, how are you all? Nice Thursday isn’t it (well, the weathers not great here but that’s okay).
Here, I will be posting chapters for my new WIP, The Woods of Rosen. ill probably post the first chapter tomorrow once it has been thoroughly cleaned up, and please feel free to critique anything from it. If you don’t like something in it, somet…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
Wouldn’t it be?
I would love to illustrate for you! I was actually considering starting out doing some smaller jobs for KPers just to see how I liked it and to help out. Prices for a typical professional are well above what most of us can afford. ($2,000+)
Welp. I’m not really a professional either. So this will…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Woah woah woah *Stumbles back* Thank you!! 😆<3 I’ll post more very soon! In the art chat of course; I don’t want to spam this topic.
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Elishavet Elroi started the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @ellette-giselle @koshka @anyone @artists?
Hey there, fellow artists of word and form!
I have officially reached the WhatAmIDoingWithMyLife age. And while I’m praying about it and trusting God will open doors like He promised, I also believe that He directs us best when we’re moving. So, I think I need to start…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Nice! Did you study/read about instances where Christians first talked to unbelievers like your scene above?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
also, if KP glitches and you don’t get all the notifs, I try to post at least once a day, so if you check I’ll most likely have posted something between 5:00 in the morning and noon.
Gotchya. I assume this dosen’t include Sundays?
I will read the section you just posted later today.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @theducktator
Finished what I know of the outline. You can use the same link as last time. Any thoughts or ideas to fill in the holes? What do you think of it?
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Andrew replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle sounded like it!
I recognized “ace” from an Australian book series about dogs; the main dog character calls his mate that once or twice when he’s talking about her, implying that she’s the very best. It stands to reason that’d be a British thing too, and it certainly sounds like somethin that’d come out of the WWI time period.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle haha!!
Not as familiar with that one, and google search brought up nothing, but I’m guessing it means that’s good.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle I love it. You can use British and Aussie expressions around me whenever you want!
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
The writerly urge to use random British expressions. XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
@whalekeeper lol
@ellette-giselle I’m glad.
And I’m over here wondering if your cry of “crikey!” was just the first thing that came to mind or if you specifically chose it cause you thought I’d get a kick out of it.
If the second is the case, your presumption was correct.
If it’s the first and I’m over thinking it, ignore that.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Great! That’s a great trope to break.
Ernst is the name of Josef’s son in CR, right?
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