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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
That section from Aelic reminds me so much of the “Winter King”! So far, I think his salvation story was the best! Well, there weren’t that many details concerning Roland and the others… anyway, that’s what I think.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah, it’s so weird because basically all they’re getting is the character’s personality and description in-book . . . also moodboards, which probably influenced it a lot xD But still, it’s cool seeing other people’s imaginations on paper.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Right. Just make sure to give the readers some regular scenes too, so that there’s a blend between time jumps and regular speed. But you’ve already done this in the sections we’ve read, so just keep it up. 😜
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
I imagine her with darker eyes and probably looking a little younger, but you did pretty well. 😁
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Thank you so much!!!!
She’s not smiling because I was trying to capture the way she feels to me at this point in the story. Hope that’s okay.
That’s totally fine! I like seeing how other people picture my characters–I don’t know, it’s just really interesting and cool. And yeah, I don’t know if I would imagine her smiling eit…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I like the section, though again, like we’ve talked about before, you do kind of gloss over everything and summarize it all in a page or two. That’s fine, though, if this isn’t a super important part of the story. It would be nice to get to see some more specifically of the new characters who’ve joined Julian and Leon, since we…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @theducktator
Okay, I’ve begun the 9-point outline and managed not to huff, puff, and blow it all down to start over again after filling three points of it. Phew! Finally, have something down for each point. Most of this you have seen already, but not in this structured form. I wrote this with the intention of the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle whoa, awesome job on these artworks!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle Thank you!! The program I used was Procreate on iPad.
@whalekeeper thanks! His design is one of my favorites, I love to draw him.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @theducktator
I’m still struggling to get through an outline, but it’s not working out well. I keep on getting to judgmental with myself, trying to write the perfect outline. I keep thinking, ‘ is this really what Alan would do? Is he unlearning what he learned in book I here? Is that a bad thing for his character…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
I looked it up and it seems like it might be…. claymation? Something like that.
Yep! It’s stop-motion with lots of different materials. Stop-motions can be less expensive for the filmmakers, but they have to work a lot more.
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
When I say it’s a good horror story, I mean that. There are a lot of thought-provoking horrors out there, usually to represent things gone too far, like dystopias. I think most good horrors are functionally dystopias.
Coraline is about home, courage, and the horrors of wishful thinking. It takes a ‘what if’ and digs into exactly…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Aw maaan 😂 I’ve never seen you back down on dramatic ‘dark’ stuff before… *Gives you a side-eye*
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
This one notified me.
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Andrew replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle do you want me to repost mine?
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
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Andrew replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
I did respond, but I didn’t get a notification either.
I’m not subscribed, and I didn’t get any notification when Ellette tagged me.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
No I didn’t. I’ve just been stalking that forum so I know what’s going on.
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Are y’all subscribed to the topic? I think it can glitch sometimes and remove your subscription.
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