Ellette Giselle

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

Nahim scene (which will probably end up in my book)

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“Life for me has been…dark since they died.” Nahim turned his face away.

Master Canin wrapped his arm around Nahim’s shoulders like a father, pulling him close. “I know, Nahim. The war has taken away my daughter. It’s been years since I’ve seen her.”

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@ellette-giselle

sounds good. Again, it’s your book. But, for me the spell images being described or not would be the difference between me putting down the series at this book or continuing if I had bought the book or checked it out in their library.

Gochya.

haha! That’s a good one to watch movies with always. No, Clear Play. 

Ah. Yeah, that’s useful.

@ellette-giselle

Hmm. well, first of all the fact that the church has stopped being attacked. Then a reference Sabina made in her letter about the soldiers being super tense. Then Joseph notices the same thing.

Ah…

I know poor Joseph!!! I’m really glad he went and talked to Mr. Caddick about it instead of just spending a good chunk of the book w…

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@ellette-giselle

You can’t separate spell casting from demonic power. The Bible makes that clear. So, if wyou want the spell casting, your going to have to keep the other part in mind. 

Okay. I might have to rework things then, but that’s okay. I’ve talked to my sister, who knows more of my plans for book 2 about this, and she does agree that th…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I feel like I am everyone’s target. *sigh*

If it’s too much, I can withdraw you from my upcoming snowball list.

Yes! Thanks for tagging me when you post your Crimson stories! I like reading them!

@ellette-giselle

Ahhhh, gotcha.

Sure!

@highscribeofaetherium

I forgot about this chat.

But hey, I finally get to write the next part of my story!

John was fed up with being stuck on the island, so he decided it was time to do something about it.

“Mother, can we please depart from this snowless island?”

His mother was tying some logs together. “John, how many times must I tell you,…

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@ellette-giselle

Aww!! 🥰

So, one question—why would Amelia inherit part of her uncle’s inn? Wouldn’t that usually go to her brothers?

Also, I like that we’re getting more conversations between Joseph and Amelia. However, I feel like they’re all based on future situations—mostly just “what if this happens?” Except for this one:
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@ellette-giselle

Joseph grinned. “I grew up with Asher and Eric. I’m pretty hard to annoy.”

Hmm. I wounder how true this will turn out to be.

“Let me put it plainly,” the Innkeeper said, tersely. “A young man on the wrong end of the Empire comes into town. He’s got no money, no family, no connections. He meets a pretty— and rather naïve— girl who…

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@ellette-giselle

That makes you uncomfortable? Just saying a guy wants to give the girl he loves a hug?

It wasn’t that. I don’t have any problem with unmarried people hugging or holding hands, unless it does become a temptation to sin. It was because of the implied temptation that I felt uncomfortable.

However, I want the reader to see that…

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@ellette-giselle

As for the chapter itself. There was the part where Alan casts all those spells on himself and the stag. However, we were told that all memory of spells was erased from his mind. Plus, spells for killing bugs wouldn’t involve night vision, speed, strength, taming, etc. So, he would have had to look them up in the book, which was f…

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@ellette-giselle

She was being chased through the meadow by a teen girl. Sorry if that wasn’t clear.

@ellette-giselle

The spells. Why do we need to know the images?

I sincerely hope none of this offended you. If it came across as harsh or mean, that is not my intent. This is (as you can probably guess) something I feel strongly about.

@whalekeeper

I for one thought the spell images were well done…
And I think the images paint a good picture of w…

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@loopylin @ellette-giselle

Baron scene!

Baron watched a little girl run across a meadow, flowers woven into her long silver hair. She was laughing in childish joy as a teen girl chased after her through the meadow grass. As he watched, a breeze welled around him, playing in his hair. He was like her Guardian Angel, her hero, who watched from afar…

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@loopylin

lol, that is the best reason I think I’ve ever heard!

@ellette-giselle

That is such an un-cool reason to hit someone.

No! it’s great, I love it!

I’m so proud of my tag!

I know what I want!!!! I want more Baron.

Or Nahim.

Okay…I guess I can do that

@koshka @ellette-giselle Okay, here’s one singular reinforcement.

Barnes

Barnes slipped past a colorful window, the rose and gold glass casting a soft glow along the side of her head.

The four students had exited the church, and were traveling at a slower pace. The leading teenager had kept the pace up brilliantly, and it was challenging at t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Oh why! Must it be a hand or foot? And why talons! Can’t you just restrict the movement! This is horrible. If he and Martha do get married, how is he supposed to hug her without slicing her back?!?!?

*feels slightly offended for the 90% of my characters that have talons*

I’M KIDDING I’M KIDDING

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@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle

Ok y’all. I redid the math and I owe you collectively 900 words. Here’s 257 words, which heals me from whatever damage done by Min and Loopy’s snowballs and puts me toward toward finishing Elllette’s. XD

Just beware y’all. To my most recent calculations, I have 46 snowballs in the arsenal.

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