Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle You’re so welcome!! 💜

and if you aren’t backed up with requests, could I possibly ask you to draw someone for me? 👀

@ellette-giselle your art is beautiful as always🤌

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Thank you! She looks amazing!!!!!

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 Things are about to get bad.

Ooooh

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A man had Rolf in a tight grip, the point of a knife to his back. “Don’t move,” he growled at Leon.

Oh…!

Leon started in surprise. The robbers were being robbed!

There’s always a bigger fish.

Out of the frying pan and into the fire.

He motioned to two of his men, and they dragged Leon to his feet. “I will kill you both,”…

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Yes, very well done!

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*saves image immediately* THIS IS AWESOME!!! Thank you so much!

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may I ask how Mateo is doing?

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I threw together a 9-point outline for Martha as well, since she will be a major point of view character in this book as well. It’s not quite complete, such as I’m not really sure what to do for her amplified pressure. But here is what I have so…[Read more]

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Actually, you know what would be funny? If one of the guys’ minds went in the same direction as mine and said something like ‘Yes, mom’ to Julian. And then, he would be stuck with that nickname for the rest of the story.

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 If he was joking would it work?

I think so. Make Aelic respond with another joke as well. Even if it just making a funny expression and saying “Ah”

Sure thing! I’ll wait until they’re published. 😉

Sounds good!

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In my mind he says it in a joking way. Is that the impression you get? And if so, does it still sound like a mother?

No, I didn’t get that impression much. Maybe if you had mentioned him smiling, I imagined him with a serious/lecturing frown on his face as he said this.

Actually, this makes me think more of my grandma or sisters,…[Read more]

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Drawing out surprise and mystery is a good idea. Hybridlore may want to know it all now, but she has more reason to keep reading now. Sometimes, it is even a good idea to never reveal but only hint, to allow the reader to piece it all together herself.

As for the editing thing again, I see what you are saying now. I guess that…[Read more]

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“Governor,” the man said, bowing low. “The gods have a message for you.” Before anyone had a chance to speak, he shot his hand out like a serpent striking and thrust it at Walter’s chest.

Ah, so that’s the assassination attempt. This raises the tension somewhat; not so sure what the impact will be in the long run though, as this m…[Read more]

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Oh, never mind. I assumed there were only two sections posted when I was unable to log in. Now I see that third one. I will go read it right away!

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Thank you all of you!

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Yes, I am all caught up. No, I did not get your reply. Probably Gmail deciding it is the superior email system, throwing it out before I get it.

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YES!!! Help please! I’m dying under all this writing! *gasp* *head rolls off…*

I’m so behind again. Maybe you could wait a day or two for me to catch up?

Oh yes. I understand what you said to me about Leon’s past.

@ellette-giselle The White Knight incident was also very interesting! I went back and read through the whole thing.

@ellette-giselle all righty, I’ll look!