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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle yes!
That was a great little addition and helped me get even more immersed in the world.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle I love how they shared the gospel with the children by telling them stories, and then explaining that the stories were true! That was probably my favorite part of this section.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I totally thought you’d be at me for separating them, but I guess you didn’t mind Rolf dropping out of the book.
I was devastated, but it works better with them getting split apart.
So, Rolf never shows up again?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Awesome, thank you!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @theshadow
New chapter is out!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle Up is such a good movie! I rewatched it with my friend last month.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@the_lost-journal oh wow! That looks great!
@ellette-giselle lol he’s one of those characters that just won’t cooperate. He does his own thing, and I just kinda have to let him.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@raxforge lol just wanted to point that out. Cause they’re called “blueberries” but are purple.
@ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal thank you! lol
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Andrew replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
I’ll be praying for her. Yes of course. No need to make it miserable for her.
Thank you
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Andrew replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Just wait on that would you? Ruth’s having a bad day and I don’t want to make it worse.
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Andrew replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
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Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
LOL, I love that movie, XD
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Okay, when I read this, I was immediately hit with this thought: “They’re going to the arenas.”
Am I correct on this?
Obviously not.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
The meals worried Leon. Obviously, Hassan was trying to keep them strong and healthy… but to what end?
Okay, when I read this, I was immediately hit with this thought: “They’re going to the arenas.”
Am I correct on this?
“No. Not Really!” Rolf laughed.
That’s funny! I could totally see Leon writing songs and writing. Maybe becau…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
you just love sailor characters. 😝
Yup. I’m not ashamed of it either!! Hmmm…well, being a sailor is a good reason for me to like him, but I really liked him because he was a well-mannered sailor. Many aren’t. I immediately liked him because he was truly trying to help Julian and his friends.
Pfft!! What!! A unicorn! That’s i…
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Andrew replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Alpha killed one of @ellette-giselle ‘s Agents.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle
I read your latest section, but don’t have time to comment on it today. All I can say is that I liked it (in the same sort of way I have liked your other sections recently) That may be the case until Thursday. Don’t worry about me, you can keep posting more stuff. -
Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle I’m honestly glad you didn’t kill them straight off. Slavery is a cruel fate for them, but this is really interesting–and different from the other books. I also like the “change in scenery” and would love a map of the new countries on this side of the sea.
I like the new characters, too.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
He’s used to fighting people who are still alive. XD
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