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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 23 hours ago
I’m just gonna post a school paper or somethin.
But is that even allowed tho? Don’t you have to write specifically for this topic, and not just post something you e already written?
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 23 hours ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle Bwahahahaha
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
@liberty lol. I have 52 snowballs as of the last count.
*cackling*
@ellette-giselle Glad you liked it! This is probably the closest thing to a romance plot that I’ve written. (Instead of it being a small side plot.)
@stephie Since you apparently want to lay catch. *chases you*
OK…
*a giant cloud of snowballs puffs up from my…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
It’s real. I looked it up. *muffins*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
@esther-c @liberty @ellette-giselle
OK. There won’t be as many more scenes from this story that I’ll share, but here you go. Its 95o words should render me free from all residual snowball debts I owe.
Tada…………..
She laughed as she dusted her hands free of crumbs.
From the sounds coming from the nearby cotes, the other shepherds were…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week ago
Awesome!
thank you!! <33
Nooooo, now I won’t be able to get that out my head!!! that’s amazing 🤣🤣
Thank you so much, Ellette!! 🤗
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TheShadow started the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 1 day ago
Okay, I have another religion related question. This is a basic and age old one, but still one a lot of people (myself included) struggle with. Why did God give us free will? Of course, there’s the answer that He did it so we could freely choose to love Him back because real love doesn’t coerce or force to love back. But then, why would God eve…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
Ok then, I’ll do this.
@raxforge 💨⚪️x2 @theducktator 💨⚪️x2 @ellette-giselle 💨⚪️x2 @esther-c 💨⚪️x2 @hybridlore 💨⚪️x2
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Esther replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 1 day ago
Welp… I wrote a short story! XD
If you have the time, I’d love to hear your thoughts on it before I show it to friends and family. (It’s kinda long, I apologize, lol. It’s under 11k.)
Tagging some folks just in case you’re interested, but don’t feel obligated to read it. :))
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @theducktator
That’s really cool, I’m a Catholic and we celebrate Advent too though we don’t have all the same days as you mentioned.
Thanks for the video, I’ll check it out.
Understandable of your parents, the whole Santa thing is one of the bigger objections some people have to Christmas. Also I love that you hav…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
I just did! They look great! Nice to see the pictures of what they look like. Joseph’s was a little blurry… but… I think I saw a picture of him handcuffed against a wall… 😳
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
Good section!!!
Again, you’re summing up lots of time here, especially at the end. I would maybe like to be shown instead of told some of that, but it’s okay if you just really need to get to the next part.
Joseph felt that for once they were safe.
Then, something happened that changed everything.
Oh no… 😥
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The Ducktator replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 week, 2 days ago
I can keep track of them.🙂
I like books with multiple POVs, but I do get what you mean. One book I was working on had close to 20 POV characters, who all had their own subplots. I ended forgetting a lot of what was going on, and couldn’t keep track of who was who.😂 If I ever get back to that one, the number will be…[Read more]
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TheShadow started the topic Do you celebrate Christmas? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 2 days ago
Hello, I have a question for you all. Do you celebrate Christmas? Apparently, some Christians don’t, which I did not know until this month. After doing some research on Christmas, I’m on the fence, but I’m curious as to what your thoughts on it are and why you think that.
Tags: @liberty @power @raxforge @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
Nahim scene (which will probably end up in my book)
275 words
“Life for me has been…dark since they died.” Nahim turned his face away.
Master Canin wrapped his arm around Nahim’s shoulders like a father, pulling him close. “I know, Nahim. The war has taken away my daughter. It’s been years since I’ve seen her.”
N…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
sounds good. Again, it’s your book. But, for me the spell images being described or not would be the difference between me putting down the series at this book or continuing if I had bought the book or checked it out in their library.
Gochya.
haha! That’s a good one to watch movies with always. No, Clear Play.
Ah. Yeah, that’s useful.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
Hmm. well, first of all the fact that the church has stopped being attacked. Then a reference Sabina made in her letter about the soldiers being super tense. Then Joseph notices the same thing.
Ah…
I know poor Joseph!!! I’m really glad he went and talked to Mr. Caddick about it instead of just spending a good chunk of the book w…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
You can’t separate spell casting from demonic power. The Bible makes that clear. So, if wyou want the spell casting, your going to have to keep the other part in mind.
Okay. I might have to rework things then, but that’s okay. I’ve talked to my sister, who knows more of my plans for book 2 about this, and she does agree that th…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
I feel like I am everyone’s target. *sigh*
If it’s too much, I can withdraw you from my upcoming snowball list.
Yes! Thanks for tagging me when you post your Crimson stories! I like reading them!
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