Ellette Giselle

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ohhhh okay! Hmmm, would the Emperor be particularly happy with that? Like I know he probably was a follower of the pagan gods and wouldn’t like the true God in his son’s life, but I feel like he’d at least be upset that his only heir is dead.

Could also have it like in Daniel, with Darius and the sneaky advisors, where he kinda…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle What an ending!!! I hope we’re getting the next book soon.

Although, one question. Was the Christian prince the only one? Who’s gonna inherit the throne when the Emperor dies now? (Don’t tell me the priests have tried to make it so one of them will get it.)

@linus-smallprint

Never assume anyone is dead until you have seen the…

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@ellette-giselle

Sure, he can try. He’s been trying for the last few minutes. It’s not going to do much good. He’s a sixteen-year-old kid against several temple guards.

They’re going to win.

Common sence. Got it.

btw, why Nick? Everyone does “Bob” or “Bill” around here when they don’t know the name. 

Short for Nicodemus. That’s all I will explain…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

No worries! I get it. I just wondered.

@linus-smallprint

(Another thought, the priests think Leon is dead from what I know. I don’t know if they ever learned that the arrow did not hit him. But this person wrote the letter directly to Leon.)

Ohh, good point!

@ellette-giselle

The high priest stepped forward so that he was inches from Dietrich. “We will take you from the palace— there is no need to draw unwanted attention. Once we have reached the temple, I will put to death your traitorous servant.”

Diedrich felt a chill run down his spine, and he darted a glance at Marius. His friend had strai…

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@ellette-giselle

Yeah, it’s kind of overused, but it does make plots interesting.

Sounds good!

By the way, did you see the next chapter of TCOH?

@ellette-giselle

That’s funny! 😆 Yeah, I had no idea this was the last section, but then… once I read it, I was like, okay, that kind of works. But it was definitely a shock.

(For a reader with an actual copy of the book, it wouldn’t be, cause you’d get to see how many pages left. We’re kind of reading blindly on here. XD)

Yeah, that makes sen…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Leon was dragged from the warm comfort of sleep by something sharp pricking his leg. He readjusted, shaking his leg, but something pinched him. “Ow!” he exclaimed, bending over to inspect the pricking.

At that moment, something whistled overhead and struck the chair. Leon hit the floor and rolled to a crouch, the annoying pai…

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@ellette-giselle

The END????

I feel like Marius and Prince Dietrich will come back. The way you left it, it does sound like an eyewitness saw their deaths, but… Why would you have cut the scene off so soon? It feels unfinished. If you didn’t intend that, maybe you should make it clearer that they did die.

I don’t know, I guess I’m just used to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Diedrich said.

Um…its Dietrich?

“I can’t get up,” Julian moaned. “I need to take my boots off.”

I love these lines!

At that moment, Leon knew what he had been missing the whole time. “Yes,” he whispered.  “This is war.”

*pumping my fist in the air* This is Awesome!!

“Someone shot it at me last night.” He rose and stumbled to t…

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@ellette-giselle

Hmm. I can see we have some doctinal differences here. XD

While I believe that differences between male and female should be preserved (skirt girl speaking), and that there is a Biblical flow of authority that shouldn’t be messed with, I also believe that women are called to be apostles, prophets, evangelists, pastors, and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle exactly.

@ellette-giselle yikes!

That bit with the thorn was really cool.

 “How you do this will differ for each of you. The women are not called to fight in the streets as the men are, but they are called to fight in the home, working side by side with their husbands to raise up the next generations of warriors for Christ. You are called to this fi…

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@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow @keilah-h @theducktator

New chapter on the doc. 😉

Also, TCoH reached 50k on Saturday!! 🥳

@ellette-giselle

Oh yeah. Pretty crazy.

Okay, I gotcha. Maybe rewording it would make the sentence more clear?

“I need to take my boots off,” Julian moaned. “But I can’t get up.”

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That was a great speech!

I like the section. Didn’t really see much except for this, which was confusing…

“I can’t get up,” Julian moaned. “I need to take my boots off.”

But yeah, great job overall! Things are really getting interesting!

@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

As of right now, I have re-done parts of The Woods of Rosen which are now integral to where the story is headed (this is because I realized they would work better for the story and characters). So, I’m thinking instead of posting the chapters of the b…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

That was awesome!!! I really got sucked into the story again! I was shrinking inwardly for Leon! I thought he really was going to get whipped…again! Then when Dietrich came…I celebrated!!! So awesome!

I also like how you show Leon and Julian admonishing and encouraging the believers from the previous towns. It’s nice to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapters 5 and 6 are out!

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle

Okay, I think you all have me convinced now. I will rethink Tyn’s behaviour in the opening later and will try to treat her fairer appearances later in the series.