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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
~ Was the plot solid and engaging?
Pretty much!
~ Did the pacing feel consistent throughout the book? If not, where did it lag or feel dull?
It seemed that a lot of incidents were happening during the time that Leon and Rolf had their entire slavery journey compared to the rest of the story. There may have been a few lagging…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
@loopylin @ellette-giselle wow the seasons are nuts in most parts of the US aren’t they?
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Loopy posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago
So the doc started glitching because it was so big, so I had to split it up so here’s part 1 of the fantasy school rp doc
https://docs.google.com/document/d/11L_B1ACW_CD2lv40aIt5dkhsaO-i8hlTSg_yt7E7VaE/edit
@godlyfantasy12 @freed_and_redeemed @rae @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @esther-c @koshka @euodia-vision @princesachronicle22 @sm…[Read more] -
whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I predicted that book would be really good, lol. XD I was talking about it in context with a bunch of books I got recently (I posted about it on the previous page). It’s for the same project that I wanted PTSD research for.
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Ruth replied to the topic Group Art Challenges! in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @highscribeofaetherium @The _lost-journal @ellette-giselle
Sorry, I meant to post these yesterday but that was Ezra’s birthday so I got kinda busy.
Here are the new challenges to vote on. I am including some from last vote that people seemed interested in.
A. The pause art challenge (I’m just gonna…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed
I knew it! Afterimage: Film, Trauma, and the Holocaust is a really good read so far.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter the 9th out now!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Thank you! Code Pen is a nice website to play around with code.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 8 out now!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Lolol. 🤣 I know, it’s cool, isn’t it?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Okay, great!
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
My gosh, you have a lot of questions! 😂 Now I don’t feel bad for having a lot of questions for my stories!
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
For me, I would say I related the most to Conrad. That’s probably because I’ve had doubts before, like him, and faced fears and uncertainties.
I would also relate to Julian in certain areas since I am kind of like him.
I thought that Dian was a…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Not sure why…. but for some reason I’m not understanding this. Is there a typo…. or am I really crazy?
26 How is it then, brethren? Whenever you come together, each of you has a psalm, has a teaching, has a tongue, has a revelation, has an interpretation. Let all things be done for [a]edification.
When the church came together…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Okay…
I was not expecting that. Especially at the end of the book!!!! You just crushed my heart again by killing another favorite character…
Despite the heart-wrenching deaths of *sob* the prince and his friend…it was a great ending and I’m intrigued by this mysterious character who wrote the letter.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭
I was utterly shocked…stunned…I even started to cry again!!!!!!
I said I hoped you didn’t kill him…..*sobbing*
That’s all I can say right now…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
Julian, Leon, and Ian. I also liked Albee. For some reason, Ian and Albee seemed really well developed, even though we didn’t get to see them for very long. Otherwise, mostly Julian and Leon, since I know them the best.
~ Were there any character…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
What’s that suposed to mean?!
Do I need to fix it or what?!?
Nothing you need to fix. Just the protagonist makes a choice at the end of Dune that saves lives, but isn’t good, and the girl he like goes something like ‘okay, whatever’, but in the movie, she is upset and doesn’t go along with it.
I’ll get to answering your qu…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
ohhhh okay! Hmmm, would the Emperor be particularly happy with that? Like I know he probably was a follower of the pagan gods and wouldn’t like the true God in his son’s life, but I feel like he’d at least be upset that his only heir is dead.
Could also have it like in Daniel, with Darius and the sneaky advisors, where he kinda…[Read more]
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Wow, this is immense. I can’t believe 16 characters have met by running into each other. XD
I greatly appreciate this! Now I get a chance to read what my peer writers have done. The doc is so massive I don’t think I’ll ever finish part 1, but still
I intend to read this start to finish
Ooo! I like this! Thank you!
I guess my characters come in much later……. I don’t see a code color for them.
@ellette-giselle Ohh yeah I have a lot to go before Rory ever shows up, lol. Probably like 150-200 pages
*Faints*
lololol
Wowwww this is crazy, and it’s only part 1??
lol my charries just disappeared a while back ago. I should put them back in, but I was only thinking of doing that at the dance. Funny that it took us like 2 years to roleplay what, three days?
@keilah-h
Well I think technically there was a point people skipped a few weeks in between some of the days? Idk the timeline is wonky. But yes it is taking a while XD
I’m excited to see your characters again at the dance!
yeah me too! I hope someone notifies me when it’s gonna start lol
Don’t worry I plan on tagging everyone who’s ever shown interest in the dance when it starts
yay!
@loopylin You. Are. Amazing. 💜 thank you so much for doing this, I can’t wait to read back through our shenanigans😂
Ahh Loopy this is fabulous 😂 You’re the best. Definitely deserve the title of official KP archivist 💅
Thanks guys! 😊 Whaley deserves half the credit too. She’s been helping me.