Ellette Giselle

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Diedrich said.

Um…its Dietrich?

“I can’t get up,” Julian moaned. “I need to take my boots off.”

I love these lines!

At that moment, Leon knew what he had been missing the whole time. “Yes,” he whispered.  “This is war.”

*pumping my fist in the air* This is Awesome!!

“Someone shot it at me last night.” He rose and stumbled to t…

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@ellette-giselle

Hmm. I can see we have some doctinal differences here. XD

While I believe that differences between male and female should be preserved (skirt girl speaking), and that there is a Biblical flow of authority that shouldn’t be messed with, I also believe that women are called to be apostles, prophets, evangelists, pastors, and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle exactly.

@ellette-giselle yikes!

That bit with the thorn was really cool.

 “How you do this will differ for each of you. The women are not called to fight in the streets as the men are, but they are called to fight in the home, working side by side with their husbands to raise up the next generations of warriors for Christ. You are called to this fi…

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@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow @keilah-h @theducktator

New chapter on the doc. 😉

Also, TCoH reached 50k on Saturday!! 🥳

@ellette-giselle

Oh yeah. Pretty crazy.

Okay, I gotcha. Maybe rewording it would make the sentence more clear?

“I need to take my boots off,” Julian moaned. “But I can’t get up.”

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That was a great speech!

I like the section. Didn’t really see much except for this, which was confusing…

“I can’t get up,” Julian moaned. “I need to take my boots off.”

But yeah, great job overall! Things are really getting interesting!

@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

As of right now, I have re-done parts of The Woods of Rosen which are now integral to where the story is headed (this is because I realized they would work better for the story and characters). So, I’m thinking instead of posting the chapters of the b…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

That was awesome!!! I really got sucked into the story again! I was shrinking inwardly for Leon! I thought he really was going to get whipped…again! Then when Dietrich came…I celebrated!!! So awesome!

I also like how you show Leon and Julian admonishing and encouraging the believers from the previous towns. It’s nice to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapters 5 and 6 are out!

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle

Okay, I think you all have me convinced now. I will rethink Tyn’s behaviour in the opening later and will try to treat her fairer appearances later in the series.

@ellette-giselle

 Dude. You are so mean. 😝

😏

Yes, but Wilhelm is the traditional spelling. 😁 (you still say it Vwilhelm)

Ah. That makes sense.

@ellette-giselle

I know you are curious, so here was my thought process while reading this:

With him was a young man who appeared to be in his mid to late teens.

Another teenage boy? How many does she have and why is she introducing another one? Or is she? Because if this is the prince in disguise then she couldn’t just go change his…[Read more]

@theducktator @ellette-giselle @stephie

Autocorrect in 1st draft be like:

@ellette-giselle

*shakes head at you*

Oh yeah, emperor, not king.

Uh oh… poor Dietrich.

@ellette-giselle

Still sad. 🥺

For now.

Yeah, yeah, yeah.

Probably. I don’t know what the king (and everyone else at the palace) is going to do once they hear of this… 😬

@ellette-giselle

Second favorite. Julian’s first. 😉 (Ian was up there too, but you got rid of him… 😢)

I wasn’t sure… I thought he was going to get a lashing. Again.

@ellette-giselle

Ooh boy. This was a powerful section. Good job.

But Leon knew they had now made enemies.

Nothing would ever be the same.

Dun dun dun……. 🫣

@ellette-giselle oooooh

things are REALLY heating up now!

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Wilhelm took another breath to steady himself. “My name is not Wilhelm Baumann. I am Prince Dietrich, son of Emperor Haidronias.”

That is so funny! When Wilhelm was first introduced, I actually thought, “That may be the prince…but in disguise!”

“One day, when I am Emperor, I will cleanse this land. I will destroy ever idol and t…

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