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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Site glitches are downright annoying.
I didn’t know that proton did that with docs.
You use Proton, right? Well that’s a way you can share your work without posting it directly on Kingdom pen. You can invite specific people to it, or create a share link that you can take down any time you want.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @grcr @hybridlore @theducktator
Just checking, did you see this?
I should probably tag some more people as well:
@whalekeeper @liberty @raxforge @rae @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
None of you have to read this, but I do want to make sure this notification is coming through. And my sister would greatly appreciate…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
What’s wrong with Alistair? Alaric is better though.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I am too suspicious about this connection to try to open another thread to do this… I think this is the right spot though.
@godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @ellette-giselle @loopylin @anyone-who-wants
I have picked up writing in my WIP a bit more the past week, although it’s a bit out of chronological order. I just…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I love her.
Thanks XD I felt like we needed at least one secretly kind adult on this rp.
I hope the problems straighten out soon. I saw Reagan Ramm visited last week.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Was that response cut off partway through?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Okay. I know there were some concerns about the security of Google. So, I decided to try out Proton Drive instead, which is more secure. So far, I don’t like the interface much. It’s slow and lacks some basic features. But let’s see how this goes. Here is a link to a folder that…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Leo
Hmm. True freedom.
Leo waited for Rory to catch up, mind whirring. He took a breath to answer, then paused, looking for the right words. Slowly, carefully, he tried to explain.
“There are different kinds of Freedom. The political kind usually means liberty to pursue your own dreams and live your life, even make your own…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Poor kid. He’d probably think sidewalk chalk was a crime
Leo
“Agents?” Leo looked up from the tile. Rory was watching him with large, confused eyes.
“Eh, no. Not what you call Agents. There were–are–plenty of special ops soldiers in the army, but they weren’t murderers and kidnappers like your Agents. They were just…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Sure, I’d be good with that. Who are you thinking on my end? I can’t over develop because then you lose track of the MCs, but I do want the characters to seem real.
Great!
I’ll leave the exact characters you pick up to you, but I suggest either protagonists or side characters (Like Noah, David, or Aelic), that you’ve been not…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
*Leo nods in concern*
*Silvia appears and gives you a hug* “Welcome to the team! You’re… Salamander.”
*Leo rolls his eyes*
Leo
“Desecrated government property? My neighborhood wasn’t a… high class place. I don’t even know how we got sidewalks. Probably one of those ‘city improvement’ plans where they make nonsense jobs…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I’m not sure. The police told me to call back if I hear anything else. My neighborhood is not a suspicious area – it’s old and very peaceful – but there’s a thick fence behind us, and a large apartment complex beyond. That’s where it probably came from.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@theducktator @ellette-giselle @loopylin @keilah-h
Sorry for commenting so abruptly, so late – I’m okay! XD I heard bad screams coming from my skylight window. There was some sobbing and yelling for help, and it died away before I could figure out where it was coming from. So we called the police.
I tend to hear weird things in the middle of the…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year ago
XD The second one reminds me of a time at co-op when I mentioned I hadn’t liked a book because I couldn’t connect to the characters, and this one guy just looked at me and said “Because they’re fictional.” He must lead a sad life.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
I’d like that. But even more, I wanted it to wake people up to the fact that not too long ago, it could mean death to believe in God. I feel like many people take Christianity too lax. Just a sort of, yeah I’m good and go to church and will go to heaven. I want to wake people up to the fact that this is 100% a war, and if you tre…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter the 13th out now!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year ago
I love these. I love these so much. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle I like that last one XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Leo: *gentle if slightly confused smile* Of course. Do…do you mind staying with Silvia?
Leo
War heroes? A frown creased Leo’s brow. Had this kid ever even deamed a childhood? “No. Just a bunch of kids walking home from school. They saw the sidewalk had a new square of pavement, and decided it would be fun to write their names…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Oh my word! WHY CAN’T HE BE MY OLDER BROTHER!?!? I need a Leo!!😭😍
*Leo is concerned. He wonders if maybe this Ellette girl needs adopting too*
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