Ellette Giselle

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Yeah, but if there’s a lot of plants, chances are there’s a lot of animals surviving off of that, which means the wolves shouldn’t be having much trouble finding food.

You could just take out this sentence:

The wolves growled, but they were hungry, and they decided the threat was worth the potential kill. The winter had been…

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XD

Oh really? Hmm. Maybe I could at least get a very rough draft done for him.

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Ugh. I kingdom pen didn’t let me know about the section yesterday and I forgot to check.

Question out of curiosity: How do you decide if the journal entries you share should be from either Leon or Julian? Some authors may try to give an even number for both characters, but you seem to have some sort of method for choosing…[Read more]

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Hey guys (well you’re mostly gals). Would you be interested in a goal-focused chat where we practice our individual writing skills and chat about…[Read more]

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Oh no!!! Not Leon!!

Good section. One thing I noticed was that you mentioned that the people were able to find a lot of food during the winter… then you said that it had been hard on everyone, especially the wolves. I get that they eat meat and not plants, but it was kind of confusing.

otherwise, good job! 😬

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Dun dun duuuunnnn.

Nice! I really liked those last few chapters!

Notes…

Poor Julian. He’s a lonely little guy.

Night was falling fast and there was no shelter. They were hemmed in by high cliffs on either side, and the wind shrieked down the path.

This section made me think of Carahadras. Brrrrrrr.

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Hmm. They seemed to…[Read more]

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Though I do know soldiers had to be clean shaven at that time…….. 🤭

Shhhh let me have my creative liberty😂🫶

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Chapter 24!

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Yay!! They finally found shelter!

Good transitioning scenes. I feel bad for the woman and the kids though.

@ellette-giselle ok but that’s basically what the stereotypes of those countries are, I can see where people got the imagery

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….

bruh

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Loll I love that one 😂😂🤣

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Good section. I don’t have much to say about it. The stakes are rising.

“How are you boys holding up?”

“Fine, but we’re freezing,” Rolf said.

This took me back to that one scene with the soldiers… 😳 I was like, “Oh no.”

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Little new Leon/Riker aesthetic (with their new (and better) character reference pics🤭 Leon at top, Riker below)

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It’s as if Rome was in Germany. So, a lot of good roads and cities and towns along those roads. However, if you get away from the roads, it’s pretty open. However, Rolf is referring to the idea that just about anyone they encounter is most likely an enemy, plus they are being hunted by the army.

Okay.

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Why did this section make me think of The Sound of Music?

Two more weeks passed and then came another fall of snow.

These one sentence time skips aren’t bad, I just have a habit of missing them and then getting confused. Bad habit, that.  The whole escape happened so fast and I kept missing things that I had no idea why they…[Read more]

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I knooowwwwwwww!!! 😭

We’re both still at home though, so there’s that.

@ellette-giselle I can see that.

@ellette-giselle wow….interesting section! I feel a bit bad for the one who believed right before the priest slashed his throat. But I agree with Leon, the sadness is tempered by the fact that they are in the presence of God Himself now.

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Oh really? I love them. It’s so fun to start tying them together in subtle ways.

Oh don’t get me wrong, I still love it.

And neither of the two guys have met. 😂

And that’s when things get fun, when characters are technically connected but they haven’t met yet