@ellette-giselle
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
The pocket thing. XD
Leo
The lorry rolled to a squealing stop. It’s doors swooshed open. Time to move.
Leo braced against the back of the seat in front of him as he helped Rory to his feet. Then they shuffled down the aisle with Silvia and Quincy close behind. The steps squeaked under their feet.
Students filled the sidewalk…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 months, 2 weeks ago
What are your thoughts on catholic reconciliation? (For those who don’t know, reconciliation is where catholics go (supposed to be at least every month) to confess their sins. And then they are forgiven for them.) And what questions do you have. (That definition is the most simple version, there is more to it.)
I don’t think i…[Read more]
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Ruth started the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Hello!
So, I’m currently gearing up to write a fight scene (I’ll post it on here when I’m done) and I’ve never been happy with my previous fight scenes, so I researched a little deeper into the specific type of battle I wanted this to be. While attempting to write the probable failure of a fight scene, I got the idea to create this topic on…[Read more]
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I also thought unions burning peoples eyes was a myth until my friend and I were cooking stir fry and she started tearing up really bad while cutting them. 🤣
It’s hard to cook when you anthropomorphize your vegetables.
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @trailblazer @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @power
Announcing the winners!!!!
First, like the previous judges, I will go over each story.
Shadow:
What a short, sweet story! You are sucked right into a conflict,…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks!
wait… your hand cramps from writing? Mine never did that. I thought it was a myth.
I have a bad habit of gripping and pressing on things to far. Since I’ve done so much drawing, and have trained myself to do lighter strokes there, it’s not an issue, but I need to train myself to do it with writing as well.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Hmm… That is a good point about Elsa’s powers. As far as we can tell once she learns to control her powers, she just seems to will things to happen.
I think I do want to stick with the idea for Alan having visions of magic capturing him. I think this adds a thematic element that will make Alan’s struggle more real without…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @theducktator @ellette-giselle
My progress today. I wrote down on sticky notes everything I knew so far about the plot.
Pink notes are what I already had planned from Alan’s perspective when I started this. Green is Martha’s Perspective. The blue and yellow at the top are some alternative ideas I had for the beginning. All the…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Yes, I have seen Frozen, and I think I know what you are getting at. Elsa, like Alan, worries about her powers and hurting others with them but needs to learn not to push others away. If you go back to when you were asking us which characters are like our own, Whaley, you will notice Elsa was one of the characters…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I had a feeling I needed to hear this. Thank you for the advice, I really do need to listen to it. I’m a bit of a perfectionist so it’s going to be hard to post stuff as it is, but thank you again.
Linus is 💯 correct. Plus, the more you pause the more you lose your flow. For me, I turn off autocorrect and gra…
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Esther posted an update 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009
Hey ladies! I’m planning to do a few writing sprints this afternoon and was wondering if y’all wanted to join me. (For anyone else reading this, I only tagged those three because I know they’re familiar with sprinting, but if you want to join, go right ahead!!)
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
My brother loses his steam over many inconsequential details.
Me: 🎵 It’s funny how some distance makes everything seem smaaaaaalll 🎵
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
have you ever seen Frozen?
✨ Let it gooOooOoOOoooOo ✨ *Throws back my hair dramatically* I sing that song whenever my siblings are unnecessarily argumentative.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Awesome, good to know. I think I do mention very vaguely later that they won the game, but you’re right, I don’t think any reader will make the connection.
So, that was my bad 😅 You’ve read all the chapters I’ve posted. For some reason, my brain didn’t make the connection that you had read them all because I read this:
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I can copy and paste the answer @whalekeeper gave, or you can just read her’s. 😉
she said everything I would have said in a much better way than I would have said it.
Then I will respond with my answer!
This is what I love about it! You confess to a priest, and through God’s power he forgives you, but we teach that God will onl…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
IS THAT ALAN ABD MARTHA!!?!? *excited dance*
Maybe…
I was hoping to have that finished by Valentine’s day, but have fallen behind a bit. Hopefully, by next week it will be done.
Love how you always have illustrations on hand, by the way. XD
Thank you! I like illustrations. This story started out as illustrations…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I doubt I’m any help right now.
No worries. I usually write without outlining as well. I’m just trying to speed up my writing and thought I would give outlining a try to see if it would help me out.
My “outlining” consists of writing random notes all over the margins of my paper as I write and forgetting about them.…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
And I think I’ll do another for R&L. However, I can’t figure out how to do the accent mark on this computer, so his name will have to be plain. Poor fellow.
@koshka @ellette-giselle casually stalking your charries…
Reuven (the bus)
His mustang would be out of the shop that evening. Reuven sighed and clipped his duffle closed. Having work in…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @grcr @linus-smallprint @hybridlore@raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas and @liberty @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @koshka @power@freed_and_redeemed and @thearcaneaxiom!
Hello again everyone! I have a question about some stuff today!
- What are your thoughts…
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@esther-c
I’d love to but I’m out of town and don’t have access to my computer right now! 😭
Aw man, no worries though!! <33
Oops, forgot to break at :00! Stopping now
Going again!
I… didn’t really follow my schedule, lol. But it’s okay!!! Because I got a lot done. Clocking out for the afternoon. 😎✌️
Hey! Sorry I missed that. I’d love to another time, but I’m also out of town and don’t have my laptop, plus I’m with family so I can’t really sneak away right now.I’m glad it went well! <3
No worries! I totally understand! <3
Ooh, sprints! If you do any more of these, I’d love to be tagged. 🙂
Oh my word… 🤦🏻♀️ You just reminded me that like over half of us on here know what sprints are because of CWW. My badddd 😂
🤣🤣🤣I think there’s even a topic for it somewhere. XD
Yeah I think you’re right 🤣 We’ll have to dig that up and revive it!!!
Indeed. XD