@ellette-giselle
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I don’t have a phone either. My parents won’t let me have one until I have my driver’s license, and I probably won’t get one for a while if I have to pay. I write on paper, with a book as a clipboard.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Fair enough. I wasn’t completely serious—there’s no time limit on the snowballs, so you can do them whenever.
Gotcha. I’ll keep praying that everything gets worked out.
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
The car is the best spot to write!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Same room we were in back before the gray and run for Quincy, technically yesterday.
Leo
He let the door fall closed behind them and headed for the box piled wall.
“Make yourself comfortable on the couch there I’ll find that bucket somewhere.” Where had he put it? A few minutes search in the tool boxes came up with nothing. He…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Leo
“Aye. We’re headed down. or rather…” The elevator came to a clicking stop. The door swish clicked open. “Looks like we’re down already. Come on.”
He stepped out into the dimly lit basement. Machines whirred and whined, muffling the ring of their boots against the concrete as he led the way around and through. Oil and cold…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Hmm… that horse suggestion is good. Good point on the dragon.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
*mischievously grins* You can’t write on your phone? 😋
Well, it’s good you’re going home. Was everything able to get sorted out?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
idk if this is a good idea, but I pictured him as quieter and much more thoughtful. Someone who is constantly watching and listening and so he knows a surprising amount about other’s personalities, strengths, and weaknesses. A peacemaker and encourager. So I guess the way you thought, except the opposite personality.
Funny. This i…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@theducktator @stephie @ellette-giselle @liberty (How is your KP fanfic coming along? Have you worked on it? I eagerly await the next section) @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @power @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @raxforge @rae @jonas @loopylin @esther-c @linus-smallprint
10 snowballs at each of you! That’s 500 words, and I expect to be s…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@mineralizedwritings (Hi! How are you? Haven’t seen you in forever!) @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @whalekeeper @esther-c @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @theshadow @liberty @freed_and_redeemed @kyronthearcanin @trailblazer @acancello @anyone-else-i-forgot
Hear ye, hear ye! God willing, t…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Yeah…Alpha’s probably the most messed up…
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Overarching Theme. […] What are your thoughts?
This looks good. I’ll note, I feel a bit of a blur between books. (You’re still in the outlining phase so that’s fine.) It’s great that you have his story divided into three areas of growth, but because they’re very similar when it comes to the actions Alan has to take, you need…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Leo
Level 0. This place had a funny floor plan. He punched the button and leaned back against the wall as the elevator began its decent.
Rory was giving him a weird, confused look. What had he said? Done? Leo lifted an eyebrow. “Yes? What is it?”
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I will need to clear this up in the story i guess. I didn’t mean all the laws, I meant more the changes in that we no longer have to sacrifice animals because Jesus came as the ultimate sacrifice. The laws changed in little ways because Hope had finally come, we didn’t have to wait for it.
I will make this clearer in the text,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Leo
He grinned. “First off you’re going to sit on that couch in the basement break room and sort a bucket of bolts and screws that I accidentally dumped together last week. Or maybe that was two weeks ago.” He paused to blink up at the ceiling for a moment, then refocused on Rory. “Anyway, you’ll do that while I check the work…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@kielah-h @ellette-giselle @raxforge @whalekeeper @hybridlore
This is the final part of Story 9.
In my writing document, I named this story temporarily as ‘Delirium’ but I would like some better title ideas if you can give me some. Thx in advance.
Five days had passed since Baron had been taken to the Handel mansion and his symptoms…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @theducktator
Okay, good. Thanks!
so, does this mean you’re gonna start posting chapters?! 😃
Not quite. Now that the core is taking shape, I’m getting ready to move into a more structured outline, and need to decide which of all the middle events I have planned will suit the story best. I also still need to figure out some of t…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Well, I made the forum, the forum stopped working for me, and I also disappeared off the face of the earth for over two weeks😂💀 well I’ll try to answer questions/responses now😅
@highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @keilah-h @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @elishavet-pidyon @theshadow @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @loopylin @koshka @trailbl…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @theducktator @ellette-giselle
Okay, I’m starting to make some refinements to my ideas, starting with some guiding principles. That involves pinpointing a one-sentence premise and pinpointing the theme of the story, as well as thinking about the arc I want Alan to go through. This is supposed to be a document that I can reference to…[Read more]
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