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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 12 hours ago
Covid 19 was not the plague.
more people died falling out of their BEDS or being bit by SNAKES then from Covid.
Oh, right.
Well then. If you will, allow me to rephrase that:
Watch out, Joseph, Plauge restrictions are headed your way!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 12 hours ago
He has become his own character with his own separate struggles and personality. Plot wise? Yeah, it’s different.
If you mean you’re safe to start knocking them off…😎 Beware of repercussions. 😎
Just kidding. Do what is best for the story.
Oh goodness! I love that girl!!!
You know, she would be fun in a RP with my charrie…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 13 hours ago
This is getting very interesting! I wonder what shenanigans will follow now they’re all together, yet I’m worried about who is getting struck next.
Amelia is a sweetheart with a spine of steel. I love when she’s on set.
One thing that caught me:
Joseph could still remember the way and rode eagerly along the streets until they…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 13 hours ago
“How can we be praying for each other?” Joseph asked as the small group sat about the living room, open Bibles on their laps.
Out of curiousity, is this a Bible study or a church service?
Trying to remember who William and Rose are. Was Rose William’s wife?
William looked up and something flickered through his eyes. “I did you k…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 13 hours ago
That’s some stunningly flawless reasoning you’ve got there.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 13 hours ago
I also really want another chapter from Linus.
Of TNPT or the boy stranded on the island story I’ve been putting on this forum?
How did you get Mark Rober on your side?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 14 hours ago
Yay! I had just given up on you and was preparing the next section to post.
Sorry, a large final assignment pounced out of nowhere on me and I spent the last couple of days working on it and another final assignment. I also had to work for the last two days. But the good news is that I don’t have any more school until January!
I…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 14 hours ago
At long last, Joseph introduced them to David, who shook hands all over again. Then, they hurried to the sitting room. The whole family was quickly introduced, and the hugging and handshaking began all over again. At last, Joseph reached out and took Amelia’s hand, leading her up to his family.
Everyone met everyone, y…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 15 hours ago
Unfortunately, not all of us have that luxury.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 3 hours ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 9 hours ago
@theducktator oh that’s so cute with the ducks having to take a journey to get to the others. I love it.
@ellette-giselle I never liked dolls growing up and didn’t have any, but I did have TONS of stuffed animals and when I was 8 or 9, I often acted out elaborate stories with them at night when I was supposed to be sleeping.
Re-enacting Narnia…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 9 hours ago
TBH, Whaley, Ellette and Koshka are all basically saying riffs on the same thing from what I can tell. It’s ok to have a girl fighting if she needs to (or if she thinks she needs to, which could be an important character arc), but don’t make her into what’s basically a guy with long hair and wide hips. (I mean, like the judge Deborah in…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 9 hours ago
Here’s 1,255 of the 1750 words I need to write. (still have some more to go🫠)
the first thing is all from 1 scene, but each separated section is random snippets of it bc I’m not being an organized writer today XD it’s Leon/Riker’s 3rd novel
the second part is a couple of scenes from Erich/Esther’s novel✨
“He’s not the fat…
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 12 hours ago
Also, if you are wondering about my feedback for CR, don’t worry! I’m getting there. I have to beta-read something for another person first. Then I’ll get to yours.
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 12 hours ago
It was something i made with canva. lol.
basically, you all snowballed me, so then I snowball machine-gunned you.
Oh. But…it has a good ending?
Okay, shall I send it before I finish or after? It’s a school paper, not a story, btw. (I wasn’t sure if you knew that.)
Nope. I didn’t know that. But, it only makes me more curious to…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 12 hours ago
I could send it to you if you want, but I’m not quiet done with it. I have until the end of the week to finish.
Yes, please!
It is a very sad beginning. 😥
But then it gets happy!!!!! 😈
Uh…what does that even mean??? What is that video???!!! I seriously don’t understand it. Sorry.
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 14 hours ago
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 14 hours ago
Except I don’t even know what to write 😂😂😂
I think Leon and Riker are on vacation enjoying a fireplace and some hot cocoa right now and I think I’m just gonna let them enjoy that for now XXXD
@koshka can I join you??? I feel attacked😂
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 14 hours ago
Oh dear. I think I’m going to go hide in the log cabin.
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 14 hours ago
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