Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

That’s good that they’ll be more distinguishable— but I hope that doesn’t mean they’ll drift apart.

Yeah xD It would be interesting. It was a sweet scene though.

@ellette-giselle

I liked the transition right at the scene break before Liesl and Roland got married. And how you showed Leon’s state of mind after the fever and how Julian didn’t understand it.

@ellette-giselle

No, I was just on my phone already and I saw the notification pop up.

Not really… no suggestions really stood out. 🤷‍♀️

@ellette-giselle

Aww. Good section. I’m so glad Leon didn’t die.

@ellette-giselle

That’s amazing!!! Congratulations!

So, what you are planning to use that time for?

What kind of math are you still doing?

I used to really, really dislike math…(that’s a weak area in our family)…but this year I started Saxon Math. Surprisingly and thankfully, I’m loving it! I think I didn’t like the way math was being…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Boom, you’re done. That sounds really nice. XD

@theducktator

That is the most glorious thing I have read all week.

@esther-c

Then sign UUpppppp girl! *Pushes you towards CEW*

@ellette-giselle

Because today I am now a graduate!!!

Yay! High school or college graduate?

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @ellette-giselle

Thanks guys ☺️

@elishavet-pidyon I’m glad you like it. And it means so much that other historical fictions make you think of my characters😭🫶

Note: I haven’t killed them in my head cannons yet. I leave that to the resident author who shall remain nameless, Ellette.

Nah, I haven’t killed any of them in my mind because I don’t think…

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@elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

Yay! I signed up for CEW too!

Ellette, what do you mean by saying everything in your world changes today?

Also, Whalekeeper, please tag me to the goal writing topic! I may join for that as well!

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, but if there’s a lot of plants, chances are there’s a lot of animals surviving off of that, which means the wolves shouldn’t be having much trouble finding food.

You could just take out this sentence:

The wolves growled, but they were hungry, and they decided the threat was worth the potential kill. The winter had been…

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@ellette-giselle

XD

Oh really? Hmm. Maybe I could at least get a very rough draft done for him.

@ellette-giselle

Ugh. I kingdom pen didn’t let me know about the section yesterday and I forgot to check.

Question out of curiosity: How do you decide if the journal entries you share should be from either Leon or Julian? Some authors may try to give an even number for both characters, but you seem to have some sort of method for choosing…[Read more]

@hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @linus-smallprint @esther-c @liberty @theshadow @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @the_lost-journal @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @theducktator

Hey guys (well you’re mostly gals). Would you be interested in a goal-focused chat where we practice our individual writing skills and chat about…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Oh no!!! Not Leon!!

Good section. One thing I noticed was that you mentioned that the people were able to find a lot of food during the winter… then you said that it had been hard on everyone, especially the wolves. I get that they eat meat and not plants, but it was kind of confusing.

otherwise, good job! 😬

@ellette-giselle

Dun dun duuuunnnn.

Nice! I really liked those last few chapters!

Notes…

Poor Julian. He’s a lonely little guy.

Night was falling fast and there was no shelter. They were hemmed in by high cliffs on either side, and the wind shrieked down the path.

This section made me think of Carahadras. Brrrrrrr.

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Hmm. They seemed to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Though I do know soldiers had to be clean shaven at that time…….. 🤭

Shhhh let me have my creative liberty😂🫶

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 24!

@ellette-giselle

Yay!! They finally found shelter!

Good transitioning scenes. I feel bad for the woman and the kids though.