Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

Well, I’m back from vacation and I have finished your book!

Sorry for the lack of comments. Often, while I was reading it, I didn’t even have Wi-fi or Data, so most of my feedback will be my answers to your questions I found on page 15 of this forum.

Overall, it was an exciting story with interesting characters. I can see why…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Oh joy! Oh exultation!

I haven’t been able to really look at this thread in a bit. (Been up to my elbows in royal icing.) Now oh!

I’m so excited. It’s this book! Hooray!

I love Cassion and Rory’s boards. They’re perfect.

Do you have a scene with sliding around on sock feet? It would be delightfully light-hearted for a book w…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Exciting! I’ll have to go back and look at the moodboards in a minute, but the link’s not working.

@ellette-giselle ohhhh ok!

cool emblem too!

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YAYY!!!!

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AHH!

I love those boards! *gasp* Oh my gosh…it’s little-traumatized RORY!!!! Wait…is Leo going to show up?

Woah…Cassian…I already really like this guy.

So wait, are any of the characters from Sector 5 going to be in here?

That symbol is stunning! Great art, Ellette!

@ellette-giselle I don’t know, but they look pretty similar, so….

@ellette-giselle oooh new main characters!!!

Are they related? or no?

Looks like they’re defectors from the army!

@ellette-giselle

Hey! Are you still planning to put the second book out soon?

@ellette-giselle

You don’t have to be the youngest to have YSS. 😉

@ellette-giselle Yeah that makes sense with your photographic memory.

My memory sucks. Wanna trade?

@ellette-giselle

They look great!! Jason’s is so funny. I like the “better idiots” quote and the one about hiding the parts. 😂😂

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I don’t remember these fellows well because I skimmed over their part so much…but from just looking at their moodboards, I instantly liked Brian! I love his quotes. And maybe because he sort of looks like an AOA actor? Jason is funny as well…

And…Evan is showing some clear signs of YSS.

@ellette-giselle Ron, yeah, but I like Jason a lot too!

@ellette-giselle so many funny quotes lollllll

Jason’s one repeatedly misspelling “engineer” made me laugh

@ellette-giselle lol idk why I did that

@ellette-giselle yes, do it

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You’re welcome!

@ellette-giselle

Alrighty!

Also, I took the liberty of converting all your chapter titles into Headings. Now, navigating the book is super easy, barely an inconvenience!

@ellette-giselle awww man no Ron and Jason? (Jason was the engineer right? The one who kept wanting to dismantle the plane?)

actually speaking of plane do you have an Evan one, too? Might make @theducktator happy.