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The Ducktator replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
I’m going to be in Chicago from Wednesday till Sunday, and we aren’t bringing the laptops, so I’m going to disappear for a few days. I’ll catch up when I return.
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whaley replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 4 weeks ago
What is Jonathan’s arc supposed to be?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 4 weeks ago
He’s slowly softening to the rebels, and becoming curious about their strength and hope. Also, he apologized.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 4 weeks ago
Hey, I was right.
Good chapters. Jonathan’s arc is starting to turn around, yay! 😁 I liked the way you did that, and the ending of the last chapter.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months, 4 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle really?
Guess sandbox games aren’t your thing then. (Sandbox=doesn’t really have a set story, you do whatever you want. Minecraft is that way cause you can choose to turn on hostile enemies and fight them every night, or you can just mine around. Or just turn on “creative mode” and have access to everything without having to…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months, 4 weeks ago
The first two seasons are definitely not as good, but they’re also just supposed to be fun and developing the character’s personalities. They’re not intended to be as reliant on story.
If you haven’t ever played Minecraft I definitely see how you might not have liked the first two (or fourth) seasons.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months, 4 weeks ago
 Just the whole minecraft stuff was driving me out of my mind. I felt like with that one he was relying more on the novelty of having his stick figures in a video game then his actual story.
Can’t say I agree. But maybe that’s cause I actually play Minecraft and know it inside and out. You said before you don’t play video games,…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months, 4 weeks ago
Because the King and Purple’s stories are amazing?
Did you not like it or did you just not find it sad?
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months, 4 weeks ago
All of them? Including Noteblock Universe and The King?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 4 weeks ago
All good things, hopefully?
I liked these two chapters. Amber handled Jonathan very well, and I’m excited to see him have the conversation with Michael. I also want to know how their mission goes.
Why do I feel like this is the part where you might kill someone off?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 4 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle It’s okay!! I’m late to reading them anyway.
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint
It has been a very long time since I last posted on this topic (3 months apparently). First, I’d like to thank everyone who read my draft; it was a huge help, and helped me re-evaluate my entire story.
Second, I re-evaluated my story and have chang…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
I like Evan, he’s probably my favorite. The other guys sort of blend together a little for me (that might just be a me thing though.) Amber is fun too.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
Exactly.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
Yikes. Poor Jonathan.
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Anywho, I came to make a kitten update and instead started talking about morbid stuff…
@keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @theducktator @whalekeeper
Do you have any pictures of them?
not yet. I’ve wanted to take pictures of them sleeping (cuz they sleep in the most adorable and weird positions) but they’re in our barn…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
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Linus Smallprint posted an update 10 months ago
@keilah-h @ellette-giselle @stephie @theducktator @whalekeeper @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium
Hey everyone! I’m just letting you all know, I’m going to be taking a break from Kingdom Pen. I’ve been spending a lot of time on my laptop for a while and I think I need to unplug a bit for my mental and spiritual health and go do something outside.…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 10 months ago
Time to take this back to art
@keilah-h @ellette-giselle @stephie @theducktator @whalekeeper
Updated artwork of Cryus! This still needs to be cleaned up, and I may add in a bit of a background, but here it is right now:

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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
Evan’s story is crazy. He must sympathize with Jonathan a lot.
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