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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
They look great!! Jason’s is so funny. I like the “better idiots” quote and the one about hiding the parts. 😂😂
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Liberty replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
I don’t remember these fellows well because I skimmed over their part so much…but from just looking at their moodboards, I instantly liked Brian! I love his quotes. And maybe because he sort of looks like an AOA actor? Jason is funny as well…
And…Evan is showing some clear signs of YSS.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle Ron, yeah, but I like Jason a lot too!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle so many funny quotes lollllll
Jason’s one repeatedly misspelling “engineer” made me laugh
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle lol idk why I did that
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle yes, do it
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
You’re welcome!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Alrighty!
Also, I took the liberty of converting all your chapter titles into Headings. Now, navigating the book is super easy, barely an inconvenience!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle awww man no Ron and Jason? (Jason was the engineer right? The one who kept wanting to dismantle the plane?)
actually speaking of plane do you have an Evan one, too? Might make @theducktator happy.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
I found Jim’s. I also have seen Jonathan, 314, and two people I have yet to meet: Amber and Michael.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
As of now, what do you think of Jonathan?
And Jim too?

…but also interesting and likeable in their odd sort of way. I think I like Jim better of the two, he seems slightly less stoobid. I’m afraid he is going to disappear into the background, because you didn’t make a moodboard for him on page one of this forum. Though I…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
I have made it up to the end of Chapter 21. Sorry for the lack of comments. I’ve been quite busy with a lot of work. Currently working two part-time jobs and have to cover for my coworkers while they are on vacation. I have time to read at work, but I am offline and don’t have much data, so I don’t really want to use it up for…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Thanks! We’re thinking of getting it printed, although we’re not certain about publishing. LotR has a vicious copyright gang.
Hehe. It’s been fun. I don’t know how clear this is, but it’s a satire on multiple aspects from authors to tendencies in fantasy tropes. The fanfic side is part of that, so we’re definitely twisting the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@elishavet-pidyon That was really good!
The funniest thing is, you are writing a LotR fanfic but in a way that no one would actually say, “Oh, it’s fanfic!” It’s a complete twist of the rules! Quite brilliant really.
Funny enough I always kinda assumed it was a LOTR fanfic that turned into its own thing, because the names o…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @hybridlore @theducktator @anyoneinterestedinRangers @loopylin (This is Onnendel’s WIP)
NOW AT LAST.
*dramatic drumroll*
Another installment!
In Which Tables Turn and Aenwest Delivers a Rant on Vigilance
Chapter 9
Dinner was full of ranger talk as everyone had a question for Travenor. Dwogin and I were…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
I just finished it…I didn’t comment much, but still, there are some. OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!! 314 was my favorite character from the first moment he appeared…but I won’t know 100% for sure until I have the actual book and take the time to fully, slowly read it.
This book reminds me so much of another story a young writer wants…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
AHHHH!!! Oh my gosh!!! I love those boards! Amber….that’s SO cool! By the way, I’ve started commenting a bit in Sector 5. I know I’m late, so I’m just skimming it in preporation for Book 2.
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium
Thank you! I have a couple more drawings almost finished and I’ll share them when I’m done. I sort of want to make a picture book now.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
All right, sounds good. I have made it to Chapter 10 so far today. I may read more later if I have time.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 8 months, 3 weeks ago
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@ellette
sure, I’ll draw another of yours. I’m going to take a break for a little while again after I adjust the current pic for Keilah—there are some arts I want to work on for myself. But then after that. 😁
also @keilah, I think I see what you mean now (about the feet).
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