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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Yeah, you tell him. (I find it so funny that our characters have similar traits and struggles. I was totally thinking of your Eric when I was editing this scene.)
This is not the last time this is going to happen. Well as they say, ‘great minds think alike.’ Or as my dad says, ‘Fools of a feather flock together’.
Okay, do I really…
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Power replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
No, not the same Andrew. (How did you remember him? I even forgot that was the other guy’s name. lol.) Should I change the name in the first book? That Andrew was an older teen, while this Andrew is like nine or ten.
When I reread your book, I remember coming across him and wondering who he was supposed to be and why you were i…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Yay, Leon and Julian are back! 😁 Great section. It did kind of gloss everything and not show it personally, but that’s okay as long as your go back to more immediate-feeling scenes, if that makes sense. Joseph’s character is good. I’m glad he feels afraid and guilty for his fear. He feels human.
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Happy Thanksgiving everyone! I drew the Over the Garden Wall brothers in celebration.
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Power replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 1 year, 9 months ago
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Hi Ellette! How are you doing!?! It’s been a while since we’ve talked <333 -
Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle oooh I like that picture!!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
“And these are my children. The youngest is Beth, and following are Elise, Andrew, Quinlan, Ruth, Amelia, Stephen and David.” – Book II
Aaron glanced up at him. “Hello Andrew, how are you doing?” he asked, motioning to the ground beside him.
Andrew sat down. He was a few years younger then Aaron, but he was just as tall. He…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
You can borrow them back to post as long as you don’t kill them.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
HEY. There’s not enough room, okay? I like that quote.
Is that really a thing? Anyway, it’s too late. They’re mine now.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Nope. Not happening. *puts all of your characters on the protection squad*
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hybridlore posted an update 1 year, 9 months ago
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Happy thanksgiving to you too!!!!
I posted in the chat chat this morning, but I doubt anyone saw it. lol.
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No, I didn’t* lol.
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lol I saw it, but I didn’t get the chance to reply.
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Happy Thanksgiving!! 🦃🍽️🥧✌️
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Happy Thanksgiving to you too!!
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I know I’m late, but Happy Thanksgiving!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Yeah, the special attention, and her age. 🤪
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Ohhhh, gotcha.
I don’t know. The way you described her. I think I’m just used to picking out love interests immediately.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Lolol. How did Linus know about Amelia already? And you weren’t very subtle. XD
True, but they would have gotten married.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I feel like Joseph and Amelia are going to get married . . . 🤭
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TheShadow replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Ah, ok that makes sense.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I expanded what I had to 202 words, but it’s still really flash fiction. Let me see if I can get my other idea in order.
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Power replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
So this line is like the third rail?
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I know it has! I’m doing well. I finished another book, am working on publishing another, and starting a new one. lol.
how about you?
ELETTE THAT’S SO COOL!!!! I’m so proud of you, that’s AMAZINGGG
I’ve been hanging in there…or trying to…
My mom was recently diagnosed with Mantle Cell Lymphoma, a very rare and aggressive type of lymph node cancer. It’s spread pretty quickly and is all over… but the treatment seems to be helping…? I think? I don’t know, there’s still a…[Read more]
Oh Sara, I’m so sorry, I’ll be praying for you and your mother. Please feel free to email or tag me if you need to talk.
Thank you, I’m really happy with the writing progress I’ve made. 🙂
Thank you Ellette!
that means a lot <3
I'm so glad!!!