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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Leo
Rory pulled the gloves from his pocket. Gave a nervous laugh. “Yeah, I have them. What do you want me to do? climb down the wall with them?”
“Yup.” Leo smiled and shrugged. “Unless you have a better idea. I’m not leaving you here, kid.”
Rory’s green eyes widened. The kid glanced towards the window and shuddered. No won…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
To say I didn’t know the minute Alan’s father made the plan would be lying.
I knew he was going to get caught.
Yeah, I suppose it was clear that would happen. Do you think it is too obvious?
Then I think it will flow much better for Alan,l and it totally makes sense for his character and fits very well.
Give him a different tra…
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @loopylin @rae @raxforge @jonas @grcr @hybridlore
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)
The hand motions were a little unfamiliar, but Marcel could guess from Leon’s expression that they weren’t in any immediate danger.
Marcel made the same hand motion. “We’re good.”
He was slightly dissatisfied with the answer, since Felicity and…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @raxforge @loopylin @hybridlore @jonas @grcr
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)
Marcel strained, trying to listen to Leon’s reply. Something was very wrong with his ears. Hopefully it wasn’t permanent. The buzzing had escalated into a high-pitched siren.
“Monsters… Huge…” Then Leon shook his head.
Marcel winced and…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @raxforge @loopylin @grcr @hybridlore @jonas
Marcel — Elderstrand (wsome of Group 1)
Felicity said something to him, but her voice sounded like a faint buzz underwater. No matter, she was clearly leaving, and a bunch of the group followed close behind.
Marcel watched the white braids fly off, brow furrowed in worry. He…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
Some.
Not fluently.
That’s still so cool! I learned a few words from Dolingo…hardly worth anything now, though. My father, however, can speak a little since he lived there for three years as a soldier in the U.S. Army.
Oooo, you want to beta read it?!?! Hmmmmm.
Oh yes!
Okay. Keep this hush hush both of you, but….. well, F…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@raxforge @loopylin @grcr @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @jonas
Baron (Brutus)—Group 1, about to follow Fel.
“My name isn’t Baron!” Brutus hissed, pushing Flare away. “Whatever you think you saw, you were wrong!”
Brutus’s attention was then caught by the girl who he was going to follow, He took her “try to keep up” as a little…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@raxforge @rae @jonas @whalekeeper @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @grcr
Felicity
“I don’t have time for a conference!” Everyone in this group seemed so distracted. She was ready to just leave on her own, but the tiniest ghost of a sense of survival made her hesitate a few seconds.
“What… Where are you going?” Marcel was up. Or at least tryin…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@rae @raxforge @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @grcr
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)
Pain rung in Marcel’s skull; he felt as if something had woken him up, but he couldn’t hear anything. His ears were definitely bleeding, since his rose-colored hair had begun to clump with a darker color.
Everything was numb. Dark, wet, and…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr
Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge
“When I healed you, the song tells me things about you, not a lot, but some,” Flare came up to Baron’s ear, “You don’t have to worry, I know very little about your past.”
“Wait, hold on,” Ben turned to Flare, “I thought you said i…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr
Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge
Flare looked confused, “Isn’t that your name? I could’ve sworn it was. Though I guess the spell has been wrong before.” Flare looked like he was pondering.
“Why the heck would it matter if we know your name or not… uuuuuuugh, o…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@raxforge @jonas @loopylin @ellette-giselle @grcr @hybridlore @whalekeeper
Baron (Brutus)—with Group 1
Brutus froze in his tracks as Flare used his true name. “Wh-what did you just c-call me?” Brutus went as blank as a sheet, almost as if he was going to pass out.
I have no preference of where exactly Jenna goes
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr
Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge
“We’ll stick with you Baron,” Flare put his hand on his shoulder.
Ben raised his head from his half-sleep, “Who are we sticking with?”
“Baron.”
“Who?”
Flare pointed at Baron, a little frustrated, “This guy!”
“Oh, okay, I’ll b…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
YESSS I WANNA WATCH BONHOEFFER SO BAD😭😭😭
I know, right?
Riker Schind, an SS officer, struggles with his conscience as he uncovers the horrific truths behind the regime he serves. Haunted by his past and the role he plays in the suffering around him, Riker’s journey towards redemption is fraught with peril and soul-searching d…
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed
Here’s Josiah’s story! (my brother)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1y-bt9Rkb_NvaU_7OHfRP4gJZPXbZX9Man8QPOqBdXyU/edit?usp=sharing
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
yes!! A girl after my own heart! lol. I am German, so this is really close to me.
Do you speak German?
YES!! I’m just waiting for it to come out!!!
I know!!!
oh I’d love to read it if he’d let me! Do you want to post it here, or do you want my email?
I can post it here. @freed_and_redeemed You can read it as well! I’d love to hea…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
How darest thou insult our fuzzy black personage by pelting our pelt with white cloud dust!?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Leon turned to Joseph and pressed something into his hand. “This is for you, from Sabina.”
I was kind of expecting it to take longer for a response to come in. But this isn’t a pacing issue this time. It’s fine we got one so quickly and I was happy to see it.
I took the boy’s hand and told the soldiers he was my son, and I would…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Question for you after you read the section above (do not, I repeat, do not read this before).
Spaces to help hide the contents:
I already started working on the next chapter and realized that Alan’s reaction to the events in the previous chapter…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Next chapter.
I’m trying to come up with a name for the village The Faithful find. Any suggestion?
Also, Ellette, I have included a sample of a casual conversation between guys. This can give you some ideas for some casual conversation for your male…[Read more]
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