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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Awwww…
Leo
He smiled, his throat going tight as he watched the kid. He shifted Quincy to put an arm around Rory’s shoulders. “We go home, if you’re good with that. I’ll explain on the way.”
Rory didn’t outright object, so Leo took that as the agreement he needed. Silvia had taken to scanning windows. Her fingers were wrapped…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Let’s be honest. This wasn’t surprising, was it? Rour warned you several times.
You can successfully torture your readers.
It’s part of the job.
What do you think of Alan’s logic for deciding to go back?
Just met the second crow, but I’m pausing to call something.
I think it’s his mother.
Maybe.
Maybe indeed, Ell…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
It might help to get the first part of Group 1 (wounded, non-fighters, etc) to the river so we aren’t scrabbling to get everyone there after this side mission.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Aw, cute scene between Joseph and Julian! I noticed a few typos, but that’s not a big deal. Only other thing is, I noticed that in Sabina’s letter someone said that the orphans need Jesus. I don’t know why, I can’t remember too many references to Him, so that stood out to me since many fantasy books use a different name for Jes…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay, now maybe it will let me rewrite and post.
*Rolls eyes at phone*
Leo
Twenty-eight. Twenty-five. Twenty. Leo felt his teeth grit as the boy slowly climbed down the building. Eighteen. Fifteen. Twelve. He edged back from the fall zone.
Rory reached the ground and stood on shaking legs before sliding down the wall. Poor…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Josef laughed and the next moment Rosemarie was in his arms, laughing and trying to kiss him. “Josef, you horrible rascal! You scared me half to death!”
“Papa!” Ernst shouted, leaping off the table and running to him. Josef caught his son with his free arm and hugged him. “Hello little man!”
Aww…it’s so sweet! I hope Marta…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
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Andrew replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugh, I’m bad at it, sorry
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Don’t worry, he will die a well-deserved horrible death.
😅
I still wish his story didn’t have to end that way😭
@rae @ellette-giselle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @esther-c @keilah-h @grcr @anyone-else-*shrug*
A couple scenes from my WW1 WIP👀
TW: MENTIONS/ALLUSIONS TO AB*SE. THREATS. DEATH. MENTIONS OF BLOOD.
“You lea…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle I agree with Linus on that too. Show some more Joseph and Amelia scenes!!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
“We’ve become the church’s messenger service,” Julian added with a chuckle.
How much do these guys travel in a week?
Hah! linus-smallprint and I called it!! 😆
Yup. Totally called that.
I think @hybridlore has a good point. Joseph also mentioned in the letter that he has been studying this subject, so we know he’s doing it. Hyb…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Here is the next chapter. Are you ready? Things are about to get darker.
Another thing. My school courses are finishing up so I have more time to write again! My goal is to get you the epilogue by the end of the year.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Yep. It just hasn’t let me post my reply RP.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Hah! @linus-smallprint and I called it!! 😆
So, good section. The end… I know you said there are going to be parts of the books where you include longer scripture passages. That’s fine, but this scene kind of feels almost exactly like Aaron’s did, when he was studying the Bible about a husband and wife. I think it’s too similar…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
What can I say?
I like pelting people with snowballs! It’s fun, especially when they get revenge!
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I have known happiness and sorrow, war and peace, life and death, and through it all, through the changing times, the uncertainty of life, the unstableness of the world like a raging sea, One has remained the same; God has and will always remain the same, yesterday, today, and forever.
A 50-word sentence. I’m very proud of…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh and thanks!! 🤗
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Aww, I love it!! 🥰
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Biscuit and Soldier sat down by Alpha’s foot, looking up at him with the most pleading, dark brown puppy eyes you can imagine. Alpha glanced at them, looked away, and then glanced at them again as Biscuit whined softly.
“Oh, alright, but don’t tell Emmie about this,” Alpha knelt down, surrendering his sandwich to the two puppies.
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