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Smiley replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
very true
I think for me it depends on my moment, sometimes insane, sometimes hiding it lol
girl same though, I love my older brother buts not that much older than me and I sometimes I wish I had like another one who was a few more years older
and the sibling relationships in books and movies are always my favorite
like…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
first to get told they no longer have to have a bedtime just as long as I am wise about my sleep
Yesss this is simultaneously the best and worst thing ever, because I love having the privilege but I’m such a night owl. XD You strike me as a morning person, but maybe I’m wrong.
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Smiley replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Hey!!! I think I’ve also seen you around but it’s nice to get a introduction 💕
I’m the youngest in my family but I also only have one siblings so that’s not saying much lol
if you don’t mind me asking, what’s it like being the oldest? Like I see everywhere that being the oldest sister is like a ton of work and by the end you…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Lol 😂 As long as he doesn’t read the posts in between.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Hmm. I’m not sure. I think that definitely raised it to the front of my mind, but honestly, in the beginning I might have still been a little suspicious (I usually am when young married woman aren’t feeling well, because that’s usually the author trying to be sneaky lol.)
I sort of accepted that your “Hmm, that would be.” me…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Hah!! I called it!!
There were a whole lot of hysterics in that scene, but I guess I get where it was coming from. Joseph is so sweet to Amelia.
Oh boy… this is not good for the Cadwicks. Or Amelia and Joseph. 😬
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Ah, yes. Let’s see, where were we?
It looks like Ben, Flare, Baron, Jenna, and Ellis are in one group in the middle of the city, with Felicity having just run off. @raxforge @rae @loopylin
Rina, Klethen, Ilahna, Jirah, Rosemary, and Rapha are on the ship with Fleet, heading out of the city. (I believe Rosemary and Rapha fell off and are…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Gotcha. Wow. It’s so sad writing about villains…especially their background. Does…*gulp* Hans have any redemption later on? *hopeful eyes*
I’m afraid not 😔
What @ellette-giselle said about him having several chances and accepting none of them is correct
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @theducktator @grcr @anyone-else
Not quite sure where to take this scene after where it ends, so if anyone has any ideas, pls let me know😅
a scene snippet from Book #3 🤫 I didn’t realize these characters I spontaneously came up with would play a bigger role in…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Thank you very much for the feedback! I will get to reading through it later.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Good section! I was going to say, it seems weird that Beric would change so quickly, but now I see he’s still going to struggle.
I have the same thought as Hybrid here. Beric has not only been independent for a while now, but he is also a teen. I’m glad you included the scene of his struggle to listen.
The soup began to hiss, so A…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
We’ll see if this works, but I have decided randomly and impulsively that I will have this whole book posted on here by the end of the year.
Expect big sections in the time to come.
However, if I’m going to get this done it means that those of y’all who do make comments will have bigger sections to comment on. If that’s too dif…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Now THAT might have just been your best chapter ever. I could feel Alan, I could sense that he was completely trust the Saviour, yet there was also pain with it, but his grief was quiet by now. If you could make the grief in the chapter before this more forceful then it would beautiful contrast to the calm in this one.
Thank you!…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
This will answer your question about the feedback I’m looking for.
@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @loopylin @theshadow
I made up a feedback file with questions I would like you to answer about my book. Do you have to? No. I understand if it’s too much and if you don’t have enough time, but I would really…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I was just talking about your Scottish heritage with Joy, one of my older sisters, and she wanted to know if you go to any Highland Games.
Do you?
By the way, your clan motto is amazing! It’s so cool that they were Covenanters. We can’t say that for our clan. Though we know there were some Sutherland covenanters, the majority…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
No, I haven’t read it! I was just looking at the preview a few days ago, and suddenly thought, “Hey! Isn’t this the picture on Ellette’s profile?”
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Liberty replied to the topic Rant Room for Baker Family Adventures Fans!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Also, how did you first learn about the BFA?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Whoa. Can I ask how much of the book is still left? That seems like it’s going to be a lot of sections.
I don’t mind the longer pieces, though, (🤪) as long as you’re okay with me not being as nitpicky. Im not sure if you’re mainly wanting feedback on bigger things or if you want me to catch all the typos and everything too. If…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Rant Room for Baker Family Adventures Fans!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
By the way, how many siblings do you have? Are you the oldest?
I have four siblings: two older sisters, one older brother, and one younger sister.
I’m right in between my brother and younger sister.
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