Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle @koshka

Barnes

Two figures stumbled around the church. Leo and Rory. They were ready to leave, although the younger looked entirely exhausted.

Barnes got up, and gave the two boys a quick look before she faced away. “…Just a moment.”

She ripped off her other sleeve. Pushing her mask up her face, she tore at the sleeve with…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Isn’t it? I suppose one must find something to laugh about when slugging through modern political world views.

*Gazes off into the distance like some deep thinking philosopher*

*Steps backwards off porch*

@ellette-giselle

But hey, it could be worse. You could be writing a Grammer textbook.

I think I find more typos in school reading than in anything else. But then nowadays that most of the reading I do, sadly.

@ellette-giselle

YIPPY!

(though Rory won’t think so lol)

Hehe I thought not

oh no! what happened?

I’ve depended too much on arm strength and I have whiplash from trying to grab my opponents. I also have really bad circulation so that isn’t any help. :’)

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Leo

He blinked. Looked at Rory. Smiled even though he knew the kid wouldn’t be able to it see through his visor.

“Thanks Rory.” He whispered with a light squeeze of his arm around the boy’s shoulder.

They stepped around the corner into sight of the white masked lady with the ruined blouse.

@ellette-giselle

Ooooooh…that hurts. I have so far picked out two typos in the one story that I have published and they drive me nuts every time I see them.

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

I didn’t meet them up, but I also wanted to give Rory a moment to process. He’s like to need it, poor kid.

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

Leo

He scanned the street around them and gave a grim smile at the silence. Rory’s voice sounded beside him. “Which direction? Where are your siblings?”

Leo smiled. “Left, and they’re at home.”

He led them around the corner of the church.

“Rory, the lady from the bus is on the back porch.” He felt Rory sti…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @koshka

I’m here, you can connect with Barnes and get moving together.

@ellette-giselle

She was kind of beat up herself.

Leo

“Or two?” Leo’s voice fell flat into his Older Brother Chide “You’re not walking all the way home. Because if you walk that far we’d be going to hospital for them to treat you for a punctured lung, or two.”

Leo scooped up his gauntlets and clicked his helmet back in place, taking a moment t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Leo

His teeth grit together against the fury rising up the back of his throat. Thirsty. He could fix that.

“I’ll get you water, but don’t you dare go to sleep on me, Kid.” He used Rory’s color to wipe the blood from his cheek, then stumbled to his feet.

First, to find water. There, a sign for a bathroom just outside the main…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Leo

Alarm flashed behind Leo’s eyes like a rotating siren. He eased Rory back down and cupped the boy’s face in his hands. “Yes, I’ll take you home. But, Rory! Stay with me. Where are you hurt?”

He gave him a gentle shake to get those hazy green eyes to focus.

@ellette-giselle

Also… randomly started singing “Something to Live For” from Fiddler on the Roof. XD

@ellette-giselle

XD I’m glad you love him.

*Shows Leo your message*

Leo: *confusion*

(Also, this wasn’t easy to write without going on a 300 page praise break at the end. XD)

Leo

Rory’s fingers dug into his armor as much as was possible. Leo’s eyes went wide. Panic flared. There wasn’t a lot of blood, but how much could be hiding in the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Leo

“Leo, why did you come? There’s nothing left. I’m tired of running and I’ve got nothing else to live for.” The kid’s eyes were dull with too much pain.

Leo felt his throat seize up, but he fought it down. Combed Rory’s hair away from his sweat flushed forehead. Night was shadowing the church around them, but Leo could sti…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m back! I’ll try to get an RP in for Leo in an hour or so.

@ellette-giselle

Okay, why is that? Was it just because that seemed logical, or because you thought I was above killing a girl, (I’ll have you know I’m not. lololololol) or because Amelia brought up wanting a child in her letter to Sabina? If I struck that part of the letter, would you have been caught off guard?

I think it was a combination fo…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @whalekeeper @stephie

One question I forgot in my feedback file under Worldbuilding:

Any topics you recommend I research to improve worldbuilding and make it more realistic?

Also, I somehow completely forgot to add Stripe to my list of characters I’m most eager for feedback on.

@ellette-giselle

I love how you took the screenshot and turned it into your own style!

Thank you again. I would like to do this with the illustrations in the Narnia books someday.

@whalekeeper

you are definitely the best artist for the job.

Thank you again! My drawing skills are a gift from God, and while I have had to practice lot to get to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

So, yeah. There’s my thoughts. I’m probably alone on this stance, but this is what I believe.

Well thank you for sharing them. I’m very glad you did. Sometimes I get the feeling that some of my readers think something I write is overly weird/wrong, but don’t tell me because ‘it’s just his thing’ or ‘you do you’. There was som…[Read more]