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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
In my defense, it looks more like a snowball on the computer. 😅 But yeah, I was too lazy to scroll through them all and I saw a round, light object… 🤪
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 5 months ago
I always thought of him as our older brother, but somehow it never clicked until you said that! lol. I was kinda like, “I’m pretty sure I’m the only person who thinks this way, and I’m not sure if it’s right…..”
I was the same way!!!
Wow, I love the picture you have just painted in my mind!
That actually makes me so happy that I…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 5 months ago
I knowww!
I kind of already knew He was technically our brother, but part of me wasn’t sure if He wanted us to consider Him as an older brother…idk, I wasn’t sure if it was respectful or not.
And then one day I found that verse in Hebrews and I was like
WHAAAAAA?!?!?
And everything made sense lol!
Like Jesus loves us so…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle oh my stars and shadows I forgot to answer your questions!!!
I think I had the tab open, forgot what I was doing, and closed it.
*the oof intensifies*
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 5 months ago
if you don’t mind me asking, what’s it like being the oldest? Like I see everywhere that being the oldest sister is like a ton of work and by the end you have mental health issues and then struggle for the rest of your life but I mean you published a book so clearly you’re proving them wrong
in fact most of the people I know who have…
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freedom posted an update 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @grcr @rae @esther-c @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @liberty @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @anyone-else-idk-lol
Hiii y’all. I’ve been pretty absent from KP if you haven’t noticed😅XD
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
hmm. Okay, do you think I should take out that part in the letter? Or should I just leave it and let the reader be happy that they guessed a plot twist or else shocked that they didn’t see it.
One more thing I should mention. Another reason I saw this is because I took a break between when Amelia first starts feeling unwell and w…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Don’t have to much to ask you, but:
Martha. Especially some Alan/Martha moments. *blink blink blink. Blinkity-blink blink* lol.
I would still like to know what your thoughts were on switching to Martha in that second-last chapter.
Just that this was a great book and one that I would totally buy. Well done! Keep me in the loop if…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I do have some questions/comments to your overall feedback. I will start with Ellette since she posted first.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Sorry, I didn’t realize you had replied to this before I logged off yesterday. Thank you for your thoughts as well. I was talking to my dad about the issue and he had similar thoughts.
On the other hand, it’s magic. It’s directly contradictory to everything Christians stand for. The Fall of man happened because humans didn’…
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Barnes
Barnes helped hold Rory up, performing efficiently, although her shoulder was still pretty torn up. She let Leo lead the way, and soon enough they were out of the tightly packed back alley and heading up the dark street toward a new area of buildings.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Leo
His eyes slid shut for a moment. Two. Then he forced them open again. “I think she’s no danger us. I also think we could all use that chair and ice, and maybe a cup of tea.”
He scanned the alley around them, noting the flickering highlights and target boxes. The police would not doubt mark this as a crime…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Barnes
How was she supposed to prove something like that? He was right; there was very little reason to believe her, and although she was school staff, that wasn’t enough for him.
Barnes breathed out loudly through her nose. After a few seconds of thought, she twisted and dug around in her jacket pocket. She pulled o…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Leo is very uncomfortable. XD
Leo
“Alright, kind of creepy mask lady who I think said your name was Barnes.” Leo tried on a smile, found it fit, and left it on. It would at least sound like he was smiling. “I think we need to find our way home. Is there a mode of transportation nearby which we could aquire with e…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Barnes
She gave him a long, expressionless look, which she only realized a few moments later. He couldn’t see her flickering eyes and mouth, as her thoughts came to a semblance of reasoning. Reasoning kept her sane, kept her so calm, that no one ever got to know her.
She nodded to herself, and bowed her head over his h…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Considering Leo already went a round of treating Rory, even ignoring rest of this wild day, his uniform is probably not spotless.
Leo
He watched the exchange with growing concern, not that either of the others could see it through his darkened visor.
“We need to go home. I may not have a full medical bay at the…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Barnes
Barnes knelt so she was on level with Rory’s hands, and began to gently wrap them with the cloth. “I stand to gain your health and safety.”
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
*barnes seems to have a thing for ripping clothing. lol*
Huh, I guess you’re right.
Barnes
The look in his eyes twinged in Barnes’ heart, but she kept her voice low and stable.
“Look.” She held up her hands to his. Both of them had deep scrapes from the concrete. Rory’s were a lot worse, since he had fallen farther. “These ca…[Read more]
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*SCREAMS*
The end of this month!!!!!
*goes and checks the Leon and Riker fund*
I’ve got the money all ready and waiting!!!
Wow I’m so excited!!! I can’t wait! Yippity yippity yippity!
I’m doing pretty good! We’ve got some crazy stuff going on, and my dad’s job is stressful at the moment because it always is after the people are done tearing…[Read more]
@ellette-giselle
Ah…those noisy charries…they just beg for attention! I am feeling the same way right now. I’m working on Buddy Brindle, but this newest story idea (the one inspired by sleep terrors) just keeps popping into my mind! My poor dogs! They’re getting neglected!
Did you know? Charles Dicken’s son said something very similar about…[Read more]
This month? EEEEEEEE! That’s awesome!!
2025 is going great so far! Finished my latest fanfic New Year’s and I’m currently having my brother beta read it.
my characters? They’re doing pretty well. I have a new idea that’s fairly original and I kinda want to write it.
I’ve also been learning animation. Which is good for me, but not for some of my…[Read more]
I’m so excited for you!!! I can’t wait to read itttt!!!
2025 writing-wise is off to a slow start, but a start nonetheless! I didn’t write as much as I wanted to during December because I was lacking in motivation (ok, I was just being lazy, lolll), but I’ve forced myself to start writing again and I’m hoping CWW will give me a shove in the right…[Read more]
END OF THIS MONTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Does a happy dance* YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hope it all goes well!
Glad you’re doing okay
@freed_and_redeemed
Ahh!!! I haven’t even bought your first book yet! (I have to collect some money). By the way, how did you find those amazing character pictures that are on your banner????
Well………I’ve been accepted to write a serial story for the Ardent Youth!!!!!! (That’s the Amish magazine I write for). I’m SO excited to do this since…[Read more]
@liberty
Oh my goodness I know! Hey, have you watched, “The Man Who Invented Christmas?” It’s the story of Charles Dickens and is so, so cool!
@ellette-giselle
No, I haven’t seen that film.