Ellette Giselle

@freed_and_redeemed

Smack!

Yay! I’ve been creamed. Now I have eight snowballs….

*grins a disoriented grin*

*falls back into snow fort*

Let’s see what I can do.

Also, adorable scene! I like how you showed what Leon was thinking almost exclusively by his actions. It really made me feel like I knew him.

@ellette-giselle I’m glad you like h…[Read more]

@loopylin @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @godlyfantasy12 @rae @raxforge @whoever

I have a fun question! I’ve already figured out my answer for my story, but I asked my friends this question and got so much traction that I wanted to post it here too. I love hearing what different people come up with. My f…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @liberty @hybridlore

Here’s your 700 (actually a little over) for the 14 snowballs y’all threw at me.

ridiculous amount of snowballs

Y’all gotta chill XD

Mostly you, Ellette😤

😆

Riker nudged the front door open, walking into the small foyer. He stepped aside to give Leon room to get inside and glanced around the…

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@ellette-giselle

good. Good! I’m so glad this scene works well! “touch down Tulip!!” (Storks if you haven’t scene the movie that quite come from)

Have seen that, but it’s been a while. (5 more minutes, and then we stop!)

I’m surprised there was no comment on the Julian/Joseph conversation.
was it good? Does it fit?

Think so. It makes sense that…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

that’s what (frustratingly) keeps me from being able to say this scene doesn’t work. 

Part of my mission as an author is to get Christians to consider things they wouldn’t normally do and to think about them. Now that Alan’s joined The Faithful, we are starting to get into this. (Once I am done with this draft, I will write up a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

So, Joseph deftly avoided contact with her, and the days dragged into eternity.

Not an easy task since they are living in the same house. No wonder it felt like an eternity.

Eric says to tell you that he is sure he’s taller than you. 

A great accomplishment.

Let’s see, he said he used proverbs, especially 31, he used Timothy, Titu…

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@ellette-giselle

Awwww…

Leo

He smiled, his throat going tight as he watched the kid. He shifted Quincy to put an arm around Rory’s shoulders. “We go home, if you’re good with that. I’ll explain on the way.”

Rory didn’t outright object, so Leo took that as the agreement he needed. Silvia had taken to scanning windows. Her fingers were wrapped…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @stephie

Let’s be honest. This wasn’t surprising, was it? Rour warned you several times.

You can successfully torture your readers.

It’s part of the job.

What do you think of Alan’s logic for deciding to go back?

Just met the second crow, but I’m pausing to call something.

I think it’s his mother.

Maybe.

Maybe indeed, Ell…[Read more]

@jonas @ellette-giselle

It might help to get the first part of Group 1 (wounded, non-fighters, etc) to the river so we aren’t scrabbling to get everyone there after this side mission.

@ellette-giselle

Aw, cute scene between Joseph and Julian! I noticed a few typos, but that’s not a big deal. Only other thing is, I noticed that in Sabina’s letter someone said that the orphans need Jesus. I don’t know why, I can’t remember too many references to Him, so that stood out to me since many fantasy books use a different name for Jes…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay, now maybe it will let me rewrite and post.

*Rolls eyes at phone*

Leo

Twenty-eight. Twenty-five. Twenty. Leo felt his teeth grit as the boy slowly climbed down the building. Eighteen. Fifteen. Twelve. He edged back from the fall zone.

Rory reached the ground and stood on shaking legs before sliding down the wall. Poor…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Josef laughed and the next moment Rosemarie was in his arms, laughing and trying to kiss him. “Josef, you horrible rascal! You scared me half to death!”

“Papa!” Ernst shouted, leaping off the table and running to him. Josef caught his son with his free arm and hugged him. “Hello little man!”

Aww…it’s so sweet! I hope Marta…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thanks again for the quotes! I didn’t want too many, so I put two more.

@ellette-giselle

Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugh, I’m bad at it, sorry

@theducktator

Don’t worry, he will die a well-deserved horrible death.

😅

I still wish his story didn’t have to end that way😭

@rae @ellette-giselle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @esther-c @keilah-h @grcr @anyone-else-*shrug*

A couple scenes from my WW1 WIP👀

TW: MENTIONS/ALLUSIONS TO AB*SE. THREATS. DEATH. MENTIONS OF BLOOD.

“You lea…

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@ellette-giselle I agree with Linus on that too. Show some more Joseph and Amelia scenes!!

@ellette-giselle

“We’ve become the church’s messenger service,” Julian added with a chuckle.

How much do these guys travel in a week?

Hah! linus-smallprint and I called it!! 😆

Yup. Totally called that.

I think @hybridlore has a good point. Joseph also mentioned in the letter that he has been studying this subject, so we know he’s doing it. Hyb…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Here is the next chapter. Are you ready? Things are about to get darker.

Chapter the 29th – The Crow

Another thing. My school courses are finishing up so I have more time to write again! My goal is to get you the epilogue by the end of the year.

@ellette-giselle

Yep. It just hasn’t let me post my reply RP.

@ellette-giselle

Hah! @linus-smallprint and I called it!! 😆

So, good section. The end… I know you said there are going to be parts of the books where you include longer scripture passages. That’s fine, but this scene kind of feels almost exactly like Aaron’s did, when he was studying the Bible about a husband and wife. I think it’s too similar…[Read more]