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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
Thanks!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@whalekeeper @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Oh boy, a whole discussion about dragon riding warrior girls.
Nope, I have no plans to turn Martha into a warrior girl. My whole goal with her is to create a female character who is neither a Damsel in Destress nor a Mary Sue. So don’t worry about that.
If Martha rides a dragon, it will be out of…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Honestly, I think this was actually okay. God gives strength, understanding, peace, awareness, revelation, and courage in the time He has chosen for the people who are receiving it.
Those were my thoughts. Even though it felt like the climax was too soon for Alan, I know that if a Christian is persecuted a week after he…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
Just drew the villain of my series for the first time. I probably should have experimented around some more, but I kind of like the look and feel of him here. His name is Iskyagus.
@keilah-h @whalekeeper @stephie @ellette-giselle @theducktator
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Gotcha. That definitely makes sense. I’ll see what I can do!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Aw, thanks!! 😊 Yeah, I think maybe all of them came from you. Thanks for that, by the way! 😁
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Wow. *round of applause* You wrote all these? That’s insane.
I’m getting what you mean now, and I have a couple ideas. Your suggestions were super, super helpful. I’ll try to look at them later on my computer and adjust the main blurb.
One thing, though— I noticed that in most of your examples (the last one hints at it) you poi…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I’m not particularly against the “warrior female” trope, but I am against completely messing up a character’s personality for what’s basically no reason.
Making Martha into an Astrid-like fierce girl would make no sense narratively, nor would it fit with Linus’s role for her in the series. Like Ellette said, I…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Awww, I’m so glad you like it!!! That means so much to me 🥰🥰 Honestly. Thank you so much for reading it.
Welll….. 😅 I didn’t really know where I was going with it when I started, I just knew I had to start. I’ll probably keep it as like, the same scene, but I still need to rewrite parts of it. It’s also super short compared…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Honestly, I think this was actually okay. God gives strength, understanding, peace, awareness, revelation, and courage in the time He has chosen for the people who are receiving it.
I totally agree with you 🙂
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I didn’t realize “wilting violet” was a British thing. 😂It just seems like the natural word to use sometimes.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 4 months ago
 I hope Andy comes back into the story because I like what I’ve seen of him!!!
He will return.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle Oh whoops 😅 Your names are similar but yours is more fun to type out
I have met Rory. Remember the twins? And I have been reading your rps. So it was a name mix up, not a person mix up lol
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Okay, okay. As long as we’re all on the same page here. lol.
Yeah, the female boss trope is just a trope to me, and in this case it wouldn’t work. It does work sometimes, not this time.
It’s a British phrase. *important sniff*
I read far to much British literature.Ah, I see. Well I can understand integrating your reading into…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Okay, there you go. I just had to protect one of my favorite characters from possible destruction. 😉
Oh no, I was not thinking any of those things would work! She’s not a warrior type or sassy or whatever. I figured she can continue to be quiet and timid by herself, the way she always is, but be the only person who uses a dragon f…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle I was thinking something more like this when I heard the dragon rider idea:
there’s this dragon in the stables that’s been mistreated or something, and as such it lashes out at everyone that comes close to it, but Martha notices it and is the first one to be truly kind to it, and as such she’s the only one it’ll let near it and…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
You can do it, Loopy. Be stubborn!!!
I can be stubborn.
I think I’m going to stubbornly accept my fate and stay lying on this floor.
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