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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Silvia
Spangled darkness in a thousand colors. Gleaming nebula. White dwarfs.
Silvia blinked away the swirling images. Another time maybe. She’d fly again. She shrugged.
“Just wondering. Not many people around here have.”
She turned her head, catching the distant rattling of the bus coming up the street. A sigh brushed past…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Thanks!! I’m so so glad you like it!! 😊 I have been praying over it for a while, that God would help me have the right words and ideas. Thank you so much for your encouragement!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Leo
Listening to Rory’s pain filled breathing made Leo’s own throat ache. He shifted to take more of the kid’s weight.
Then they were on the pavement outside the apartment complex. Another five halting steps deposited them on the bench at the bus stop. Leo let out a gust of air.
“Sorry kid. You probably shouldn’t be out of bed…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
You’re fine. You’re still in charge of your character, but I get it. =)
Leo
He stacked their empty plates and carried them to the sink. They’d do the washing up later.
“Quincy, you got your backpack?”
The boy nodded and grinned, swinging his feet under his chair. Bare feet. Silvia her out a half exasperated laugh. “Monkey,…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
Thanks for the suggestions. I think I’m likely to include all of those eventually.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @raxforge @whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @keilah-h
Thank you all of you.
For those of you who have read my draft, do you have any requests for my next illustration? I’m thinking of either a fight scene or Alan in prison.
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Yeah… 🤣🤣😶
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
You’re right, you’re right, but that was a better comparison than the Cadwicks. Plus, Sabina and Turin became nicer xD
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Lesson learned… I guess I have to add you every time. Unless you were using a different account?
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
Totally! He has some great qualities but he’s also too emotionally independent for his own good. I love how Jane Austen highlights how important socialization is, and how it’s different from ‘society,’ as in the constructed hierarchy and traditions. Because Darcy really equates them with each other without thinking, and avoids…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Yayy!!!
Hmm… they are reminding me of Sabina and Turin a little. More closed-off, not believers, smaller family who probably went through some grief. I’m excited to learn more about them. I feel like the father is already suspicious of them… meaning he might be really opposed when they bring up God… but Liesl will probabl…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
Knew it. I find it more funny than most, because I and my friend have been compared to Darcy and Bingley before. She had to teach me to enjoy line dances, because I was more skittish than a cat. XD Darcy is a kindred spirit of mine.
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
That picture of Darcy made me wheeze for some reason. XD Is the comparison because he’s hostile in the beginning and has darker hair than Aaron? Because Darcy and Bingley are definitely an iconic introvert/extrovert duo, and that’s what I think of when I see them.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
Why does Darcy look like he just got out of prison?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Chapters 5 and 6 are out! Same link as last time…
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iTo1_yooHUC67Ve8ddKn2gCS0rK_fjpc0kh_NJu3Sig/edit
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka @raxforge @theshadow @anyone-else
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Okay!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Leo
“Well…” Leo dragged out the word into a verbal smile. “First things first, you’ll need to get cleaned up for the day. I have some extra clothes you can have, and most of those bandages need changed too. Then breakfast. If you need help with anything, please let me know. I’ve been knocked about a few times before. Leaves…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I know.
But the MOST utterly hilarious part is the goat woo!!!!!! When we first heard it, we were utterly shocked. And then we had to repeated that part again…and again…and again…and it is still belly-achingly funny!!!!!!🤣
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I’m choking with laughter.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
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