Ellette Giselle

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Very sorry for not replying soon. Work picked up again, and I’ve been wasting the free time I have.

Wow!! That was fast!

Heh heh. I had a lot of free time to read during long drives.

I think we both have different beliefs on this in general, but if there are some things you want to talk about, then I’m willing to listen. I t…

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I was telling my (aspiring pilot) brother about this book and he brought up a good point. The US Air Force has trackers on all of their planes. Why would this government, with all its advanced technology, not have a way to track the Wraith?

@ellette-giselle @liberty

Jonathamber?

I like Amnathan too.

What makes you say that?? lol

The first book… 😂

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Hey! How about JonA?

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I feel like I may have found my shippers for this book. Can you even “ship” those names? What would that even be?

Hah! This is awesome! Let’s see…

Some ideas:

Amthan

Amnathan

Jonamb

I like Amnathan the best. It has a cool rhythm. Does anybody have other ideas?

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I feel like Amber and Jonathan are going to adopt Leo. 😂

I agree 100%! And I totally think Jonathan and Amber are going to fall in love.

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😊

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I feel like Amber and Jonathan are going to adopt Leo. 😂

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Loll

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Uh oh… KP looks weird…

Great chapters!! I can’t wait to see what happens next!

@keilah-h 😊😊

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I think I’m still going to take a break for a little longer…

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Aww! Jonathan and Amber and Leo were so cute. 🥰

Poor 618. And 621. That government! 😡

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Thank you very much!

Of course! *Tips hat*

That was really helpful about the description thing. I think that makes more sense. I wonder too if I over-did the “buzz” words in dystopian literature because I was trying to cut down on description. XD I’ll totally look at that.

I get that. Descriptive words have so many different quali…[Read more]

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Yay! Jonathan and Michael are back!!

These were great chapters. I can’t wait for 618 (Rory?) to meet the rebellion. (I’m assuming that will happen, anyway.)

@liberty, I think they were your comments? I really hope you’re wrong about Michael dying. 🥺😢

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Yes… I did…. (I have an aspiring pilot of a brother with pilot friends, so yes. XD) but I also invented this plane so I have a little leeway.

Ah, right! I forgot about that. Neat!

why, did something stand out that seemed incorrect?

Nope, it’s actually the opposite. I was so impressed by how realistic it all sounded.

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I went through all six chapters! I’m thoroughly enjoying the story! I’m excited to see Cassion appear.

By the way, how much research did you do for all the jet tech stuff? Did you actually look into all those terms they talked about?  Especially Jason’s engineering talk…

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Hooray! Evan got a board! Some of the quotes on Jason’s remind me of my grandfather. He’s an engineer. XD I like Cassion already, though his Romanesque name in a dystopia is messing with my brain. XD With school, work, and dance starting, I likely won’t be as consistent with this book. You may get a week’s worth of comments each…[Read more]

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Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Some of the characters had very compelling characteristics, like Jim’s human decency and Evan with his likable dialogue. They all served their roles and were decently memorable. Jonathan was my favorite because he was the POV…[Read more]

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I’m trying to fill out these feedback questions before I lose track of what’s happening. *Types furiously*

Someone suggested I cut the last section of the blurb and leave it with the part about Jonathan’s friendship because it has more of a cliffhanger. What do you think?

I say remove the part about tragedy striking, and only…[Read more]