Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

*squeals with delight over a new treasure*

Erich and his wife Helene are such a sweet couple, and Erich has the makings of a strong leader.

*dances around the room*

I am SO stealing that name from you!!!!!!! I have a Helen in my story…but I never thought of spelling it like that! It fits my character so much more to add an…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Cool!!! I really liked the idea of a Daniel twist. Plus, it gives me Narnia fkashbacks with Shasta in the desert. That just makes me happy. 😊

Yes! I was reminded of Shasta as well!

But why do you like him over Rolf’s other friends??! (I mean, I like him best, but I know his entire story. You just saw a tiny bit of i…

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@ellette-giselle

Another thing:

Why is it that bad guys always seem to ride black horses?

“Because, God has called me to bring the message of salvation to my people,” Rolf replied.

Hmmm…I thought you were going to take the story to where God had called those two to stay there and evangelize that area…but I guess not.

Leon smirked, havi…

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@ellette-giselle

Neat! I loved the part of when the lion came to rescue them. As soon as I read about that lion I knew it was there to protect them!!!! That happened to a character of mine as well.

Hmm…the part when they got tied in the dessert gave me flashbacks of Leiand.

And…*crying* You killed another one of my favorite characters! Why…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Does Everette have a board??? I want an Everette board!!!

I can post his and Juliet’s in a minute . . .

I hope one of them dies in the end.

Really? 🙄🤣

I’m also hoping Everette and Sara get married in the future. So… maybe he shouldn’t die.

I will reveal nothing . . . 🤭

@ellette-giselle

Yayyy!! They’re back! 🥰

This was a good section too.

The one that seems to be their leader is extremely bold, and he doesn’t seem to care what anyone says— or throws at him.”

Leon smirked, having a hard time stifling a laugh. He could guess who that was

Lol 🤣

Hi Julian, we’re back.”

This did seem a little out of place. I’m…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

But it’s so sad when the favorite character dies!!! And I love crying over books!!

If they don’t die she at least needs to make life miserable for them for a few chapters.

But trauma doesn’t automatically make characters deeeeep… 😫 Actually side note, I’ve been thinking about this topic and we should make a thread for…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Maybe all our writing has come to life and our characters are walking around in different places!! (sounds like a movie or something)

It could be kinda scary if some of my villains got loose. 😂

Lol that would be weird….but also kinda cool. Except for the scary villains haha, I have my share of those.

 

 

Now where are my t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle You’re crazy girl! Lol

 

okay but I do agree with you, making the main character miserable is fun. Not so much killing them all the time in my book, but brutally scarring them is what I tend to do.

you lose an eye and YOU lose BOTH eyes and this one get his arm slashed off and this one gets her wings shredded

 

lol

@ellette-giselle

He and Alec are my favorite.

I hope one of them dies in the end.

Why am I not surprised loll

@ellette-giselle

I mean, if I bumped up the year the story takes place a decade or two, it would be even more realistic cuz then she’d be of marrying age!!! 😆

Oh no!! I have some characters from older WIPs that I would not like to meet 🫣😂

@ellette-giselle

No……

You’re joking….

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

😱 Ahhhh that’s crazy!!!! 🤯

@ellette-giselle
No way!!! That’s insane!!! 😱 Oh my goodness that’s so funny!! 😂😂 That’s so crazyyyy. Wait what did her husband fiance look like??

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Two new chapters this week! They should be uploaded to the doc now. Excited to hear what y’all think!

@ellette-giselle

Yes! I like how you did Rolf’s story. It didn’t disrupt the flow, but also kept you from an info dump (while still avoiding the confusion of too many flash backs). Well done.

Conrad. *Sniffles* Brave young boy.

One note: Rolf seems to weep a lot in the desert, despite severe dehydration. While I understand him crying, I’d…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Got another busy start to this week, so I won’t be able to give you feedback until later. Sorry.

@ellette-giselle

Yep! I noticed that! 😆 “Teacher.” I like it.

@ellette-giselle

I love the way you put us inside Rolf’s story instead of having him just tell it. It worked so much better. Also, the transitions were great.

Good section. The part about Conrad was sad, though. I don’t really have any big critiques. Great job!

@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

New chapter, please tear into this.

Chapter 4

Dylan stopped abruptly, “Where’s the path?”
“What do you mean ‘where’s the path’?” Olivia shoved past Elina and Jack, gazing out ahead. A seemingly endless sea of trees met her.

“Oh, great, nic…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle aww man that’s horrible!